Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời có ý chính nhưng dùng sai thì, sai cấu trúc và diễn đạt chưa tự nhiên. “When I was a little” nên đổi thành “When I was little”, “I just don't have back” không rõ nghĩa và cần diễn đạt là “I didn’t have one”. Ngoài ra, “my parents worked at the office” cần có liên từ để nối với lý do, chẳng hạn “so”. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp ở câu đầu, sau đó thêm một lý do hoặc cảm nhận cá nhân cụ thể.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was little. My parents both worked long hours, so they didn’t have time to teach me how to ride one or buy me a bike. I usually walked to school instead.

제안: Câu trả lời có đề cập đến việc đạp xe để tập thể dục nhưng chưa trả lời rõ ràng mức độ phổ biến của xe đạp. “In my countries” nên là “In my country”, “people are often goes” nên là “people often ride bikes”, và “they want to exercising” nên là “they want to exercise”. Cần tránh lặp từ “go” và diễn đạt rõ sự đối lập: xe đạp phổ biến để tập thể dục nhưng ít được dùng để đi làm vì bất tiện. Hãy dùng các từ nối như “however” hoặc “although” và đưa ra một ví dụ cụ thể.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among people who want to exercise. Many people ride them in parks or around their neighborhoods at weekends. However, bikes are less common for commuting because the roads are crowded and cycling can be inconvenient.

× When I was a little, I just don't have back.

✓ When I was little, I just didn't have a bike.

Because the question refers to the student's childhood, the past tense is required: do not becomes did not. The phrase a little is incorrect here; when describing someone's age or childhood state, use when I was little. The noun bike also needs the indefinite article a because it is a singular countable noun.

× My mother and father just work at their office they won't give me.

✓ My mother and father just worked at their office, and they wouldn't give me one.

The past tense worked is needed because the student is talking about the past. Wouldn't is more suitable than won't because it describes a refusal in the past. The original contains two clauses joined without a conjunction or appropriate punctuation, so and is added. The pronoun one replaces the omitted singular noun bike after give me.

× In my countries people are often goes by bike when they like to fitness thing they want to exercising.

✓ In my country, people often go by bike when they want to exercise.

Use the singular country because the student is referring to one country. People is plural, so the verb must be go, not goes. The simple present is appropriate for a general fact, so are is removed. After want to, use the base form exercise, not the -ing form exercising. The original contains an incomplete and unclear clause, so it is reorganized into a complete sentence.

× They won't go to work or go to any place bye bye because they are inconvenient.

✓ They do not go to work or anywhere by bike because bikes are inconvenient.

Use the simple present do not to describe a general habit or situation instead of the future form won't. By is the correct preposition in the phrase by bike; bye is not a preposition. The pronoun they refers to people, but inconvenient should describe the bikes, so the subject is changed to bikes.