Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly and naturally. The phrase “I did have the bike” is grammatically possible but sounds overly emphatic, and “the bike” is less natural when mentioning it for the first time. Use “a bike” and add one specific supporting detail, such as when you used it or who gave it to you.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it around my neighborhood after school, and it was one of my favorite ways to spend time outdoors.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence first, then explain the reasons in a logical order using linking words. Avoid unnatural phrases such as “the mode of transportation is on the bikes,” “other stuff,” and “ever green”; say “bikes are a common means of transport,” “narrow roads,” and “remain popular.” Also avoid sentence fragments and repetition, and include a specific example or comparison with cars.

예시: Yes, bikes are extremely popular in India, especially in crowded cities. Many people prefer them because they are affordable, fuel-efficient, and easier to use on narrow, busy roads. Although cars are becoming more common, motorcycles and scooters remain one of the most convenient means of transportation.

× Yes, I did have the bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child.

The question asks whether you had a bike in general, so the indefinite article 'a' is more appropriate than the definite article 'the'. Use 'the' only when referring to a specific bike that has already been mentioned or identified.

× Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, which is India where the mode of transportation is on the bikes and mainly because of the narrower roads and other stuff. So and cars are also getting popular nowadays, but bikes are ever green.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, India, where bikes are a common mode of transportation, mainly because of the narrow roads. Cars are also becoming more popular nowadays, but bikes remain popular.

The phrase 'transportation is on the bikes' uses the wrong preposition and is unnatural. Use 'by bike' or say that 'bikes are a common mode of transportation.' Also, 'the narrower roads' is not appropriate without a clear comparison; 'the narrow roads' is better here.

× Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, which is India where the mode of transportation is on the bikes and mainly because of the narrower roads and other stuff. So and cars are also getting popular nowadays, but bikes are ever green.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, India, where bikes are a common mode of transportation, mainly because of the narrow roads. Cars are also becoming more popular nowadays, but bikes remain popular.

'So and' incorrectly combines two conjunctions. Use either 'so' or 'and', or omit both when starting a new sentence. In this context, the second sentence can begin directly with 'Cars are also becoming more popular nowadays.'

× Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, which is India where the mode of transportation is on the bikes and mainly because of the narrower roads and other stuff. So and cars are also getting popular nowadays, but bikes are ever green.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, India, where bikes are a common mode of transportation, mainly because of the narrow roads. Cars are also becoming more popular nowadays, but bikes remain popular.

The original response contains an overloaded and unclear sentence. The phrase 'which is India where' is awkward, and 'mainly because...' is not properly connected to the main clause. Divide the ideas into clear sentences and use a complete structure: subject, verb, and complement.