Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is grammatically correct and directly answers the question. However, it is slightly repetitive because “didn’t” already refers to your childhood. To make the answer more effective, add a brief reason or personal detail, such as whether you preferred another activity or whether bikes were common among your friends.

예시: No, I didn’t. My family couldn’t afford a bike at the time, and I usually played football with my friends instead.

제안: Your answer gives a clear opinion, but the supporting explanation is difficult to understand and contains several grammar and word-choice errors. Use “people” instead of “peoples,” and explain that people use bikes for transportation or exercise rather than saying they “work for their better health.” Also, “they used to communicate with each other and this time” is unclear; replace it with a specific reason, such as heavy traffic, limited bike lanes, or people’s preference for cars and public transport. Organize the response with a clear reason and, if possible, a short example.

예시: No, I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country. Most people prefer to use cars or public transport because the roads are busy and there are very few bike lanes. However, cycling is becoming more popular among young people who want to exercise and protect the environment.

× No, they are not popular in our country because the peoples generally work for their better health and they used to communicate with each other and this time.

✓ No, they are not popular in our country because people generally work for better health and use bikes to communicate with each other.

People is already a plural noun, so it does not take the plural ending -s. The word peoples is used only when referring to different ethnic or national groups. Also, the possessive phrase their better health is unnatural here; better health or their health is more appropriate. Use people rather than the peoples when referring to people in general.

× No, they are not popular in our country because the peoples generally work for their better health and they used to communicate with each other and this time.

✓ No, they are not popular in our country because people generally work for better health and use bikes to communicate with each other nowadays.

The question asks about the present situation, so the present-tense verb use is needed instead of the past-habitual form used to communicate. Used to describes a repeated action in the past that is no longer generally true. For present habits, use the simple present: people use bikes. Also, nowadays is the natural expression for referring to the present period.