Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你没有直接回答考官的问题，而是重复并改成了另一个问题（bag）。首先要准确回答“是否小时候有自行车”，可以使用“Yes, I did”或“No, I didn’t”作为主题句，然后补充一个具体细节。注意使用过去时，并在句末加问号或句号。

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was about eight years old, and I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.

제안: 回答中出现重复（“I don’t”）和明显的表达错误（“by bugs”），而且“I don’t like...”回答的是个人喜好，没有直接说明自行车在本国是否流行。先明确回答“Yes, they are”或“No, they aren’t”，然后用because连接原因，并提供具体情况。注意谈论bike时使用复数代词“they”，不要用“it”。

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among young people. This is because they are affordable and convenient for short journeys, although many people still prefer cars because of the hot weather.

× No, I don't I don't like it by bugs

✓ No, I don't. I don't like bikes.

原句中两个完整句子直接连接，缺少句号或连接词，因此属于句子结构错误。应在“No, I don't”后加句号。此外，回答关于自行车是否受欢迎的问题时，使用复数名词“bikes”比使用不明确的代词“it”更准确。“by bugs”不是正确的英语表达；如果你想表达“不喜欢自行车”，应说“I don't like bikes”。

× No, I don't I don't like it by bugs

✓ No, I don't. I don't like bikes.

“it”是单数代词，而前文谈论的是复数名词“bikes”，所以这里应直接使用复数名词“bikes”，或使用复数代词“them”。例如：I don't like them。