Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer the question directly instead of repeating it. Start with a clear response such as “Yes, I did” or “No, I didn’t,” and then add one or two specific details, such as when you used the bike, where you rode it, or who gave it to you.

예시: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a small red bike when I was about six years old. I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends after school.

제안: The main idea is clear, but correct the grammar and make the answer more natural. Use “bikes are really popular” rather than “it’s really popular,” and say “people riding bikes” instead of “people that riding a bike.” Also, provide a more specific reason or example and use a linking word such as “because” or “for example.”

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short journeys. For example, many people ride bicycles to work or school, especially in cities with heavy traffic.

× I think it's really popular 'cause I saw a lot of people that riding a bike.

✓ I think bikes are really popular because I saw a lot of people riding bikes.

The noun bikes is plural, so the singular pronoun it and singular verb is do not agree with it. Use the plural subject bikes with are: bikes are really popular. Also, bikes is more natural than a bike when speaking about bikes in general.

× I think it's really popular 'cause I saw a lot of people that riding a bike.

✓ I think bikes are really popular because I saw a lot of people who were riding bikes.

The relative clause that riding a bike is incomplete because the plural subject people needs the auxiliary verb were before the present participle riding. The correct structure is people who were riding bikes. You can also use people riding bikes when a shorter participial phrase is appropriate.