Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer the question directly using the past tense: “Yes, I had…” Correct the word order and say “an expensive bike” rather than “about expensive bike.” Also, use the natural phrase “when I was a child” or “during my childhood.” Add one specific detail, such as when you used the bike or where you rode it.

예시: Yes, I had an expensive bike when I was a child. I often rode it around my neighborhood after school. I really enjoyed cycling because it gave me a sense of freedom.

제안: State your opinion clearly and avoid repeating words or using fillers such as “uh.” Use the correct verb “ride,” not “write,” and use the plural form “bikes are popular.” Support your opinion with a clear reason and a specific example, such as people riding bikes to work, school, or nearby shops. Use linking words such as “because” and “for example” to make your answer more coherent.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they are convenient and inexpensive. Many people ride them to work or school, especially in crowded cities. For example, bike-sharing services are common in my city, and many residents use them every day.

× Yes, I about expensive bike in my child.

✓ Yes, I had an expensive bike when I was a child.

The question asks about a past situation, so the past-tense verb had is needed. Use had to describe possession in the past.

× Yes, I about expensive bike in my child.

✓ Yes, I had an expensive bike when I was a child.

The singular countable noun bike needs an article. Use an before expensive because expensive begins with a vowel sound: an expensive bike.

× Yes, I about expensive bike in my child.

✓ Yes, I had an expensive bike when I was a child.

In my child is not correct for referring to a person’s age during childhood. Use when I was a child instead.

× Yes, I about expensive bike in my child.

✓ Yes, I had an expensive bike when I was a child.

The original sentence does not contain a correctly formed main verb. Add had to express possession and was to complete the time expression when I was a child.

× I think uh, the bike bikes, uh, uh, popular in my country because, uh, people write a bike bike, uh, every day and uh, they are often.

✓ I think bikes are popular in my country because people ride bikes every day, and bikes are common.

When speaking about bicycles in general, use the plural noun bikes. Do not use the singular forms the bike or a bike in these general statements.

× I think uh, the bike bikes, uh, uh, popular in my country because, uh, people write a bike bike, uh, every day and uh, they are often.

✓ I think bikes are popular in my country because people ride bikes every day, and bikes are common.

The plural subject bikes must be followed by the plural verb are. The correct structure is bikes are popular.

× I think uh, the bike bikes, uh, uh, popular in my country because, uh, people write a bike bike, uh, every day and uh, they are often.

✓ I think bikes are popular in my country because people ride bikes every day, and bikes are common.

When referring to bicycles generally, omit the definite article the and the indefinite article a. Use the plural form bikes without an article.

× I think uh, the bike bikes, uh, uh, popular in my country because, uh, people write a bike bike, uh, every day and uh, they are often.

✓ I think bikes are popular in my country because people ride bikes every day, and bikes are common.

Often is an adverb of frequency and cannot describe what bikes are like in this sentence. Use an adjective such as common after are.