Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer the question directly and avoid unclear or incorrect expressions such as “I was a bank,” “how to backing,” and “another face.” You probably mean “I had a bike,” “learned how to ride,” and “an important step toward growing up.” Use a simple topic sentence first, followed by one specific detail about your childhood. Also, avoid repeating the same idea and connect your detail with a clear linking phrase such as “because” or “For example.”

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. Learning to ride it was an important part of growing up because it gave me more independence. I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.

제안: Give a clear answer using the plural form: “Yes, bikes are quite popular.” Replace unclear phrases such as “say straight,” “riding back,” and “the economy is very boosting on about the back” with precise language. Support your opinion with specific reasons, such as exercise, commuting, or environmental benefits. Avoid fillers and unfinished phrases, and keep the answer to three or four well-connected sentences.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among young people and adults. Many people ride them for exercise, while others use them to commute because they are affordable and environmentally friendly. I also have a bike, and I sometimes ride it in the park at weekends.

× It's kind of ritual that as a child you always learn how to backing.

✓ It's kind of a ritual that, as a child, you always learn how to back.

The singular countable noun ritual needs the indefinite article a. A singular countable noun cannot normally be used without an article in this context.

× You always learn how to backing.

✓ You always learn how to back.

The structure how to must be followed by the base form of the verb, not the -ing form. Therefore, backing should be changed to back.

× As a child you always learn how to back.

✓ As a child, you always learned how to back.

The phrase as a child refers to a period in the past, so the past tense learned is more appropriate than the present-tense form learn.

× You can always say straight with the people riding back, not just the children and lots of adults do it and you know, for exercise.

✓ You can always see people riding bikes, not just children. Lots of adults do it, too, for exercise.

The original sentence joins several ideas without clear grammatical structure. Separating the ideas into two sentences makes the meaning clearer and avoids an incorrectly connected list of clauses.

× For exercise.

✓ They do it for exercise.

For exercise is only a prepositional phrase and does not contain a subject and a verb. Adding They do it creates a complete sentence.

× Yes, it's quite popular.

✓ Yes, bikes are quite popular.

The subject bikes is plural, so it should be followed by the plural verb are. Using bikes as the subject also answers the examiner's question more directly.