Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答基本切题，但存在较多时态、搭配和词汇错误。应使用过去时描述童年经历：将“have”改为“had”，“teach”改为“taught”；“at my about five years old”应改为“when I was about five years old”。“I am so hard to learn”表达不自然，可改为“It was quite difficult for me to learn”；“write”应为“ride”，“I’m pressured”不符合语境，可改为“I was really proud of myself”。建议按照“直接回答+学习过程+结果”的结构组织，并使用“at first”和“but eventually”等连接词。

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My mother taught me how to ride it when I was about five years old. It was quite difficult at first because I often lost my balance, but I eventually learned to ride it and felt really proud of myself.

제안: 回答观点明确，也给出了交通拥堵这一原因，但语法和表达不够自然。“Yes, it is”中的主语应与复数“bikes”一致，改为“Yes, they are”；避免重复“my country”，可用“there”；“in the morning and the evening”更自然地说“during the morning and evening rush hours”；“the bike couldn’t have”表达错误，应改为“bikes can avoid traffic jams”或“bikes are less affected by traffic”。建议使用“because”和“as a result”连接观点与原因，并补充一个具体结果。

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in large cities. There are many cars on the roads, so traffic jams are common during the morning and evening rush hours. As a result, many people choose bicycles because they can avoid heavy traffic and are also better for the environment.

× Yep, I absolutely have a bike a child, and my mother teach me how to ride that at my about five years old.

✓ Yep, I absolutely had a bike as a child, and my mother taught me how to ride it when I was about five years old.

问题描述的是童年经历，因此要使用过去时。have 改为 had，teach 改为 taught，am 的过去式 was。回答过去经历时，要检查句子中的主要动词是否都使用过去时。

× Yep, I absolutely have a bike a child, and my mother teach me how to ride that at my about five years old.

✓ Yep, I absolutely had a bike as a child, and my mother taught me how to ride it when I was about five years old.

表示“小时候”应使用 as a child；表示“当我大约五岁时”应使用 when I was about five years old。不能说 a bike a child 或 at my about five years old。

× Yep, I absolutely have a bike a child, and my mother teach me how to ride that at my about five years old.

✓ Yep, I absolutely had a bike as a child, and my mother taught me how to ride it when I was about five years old.

that 通常用于指示某个事物，前文已经提到 bike，使用人称代词 it 更自然。ride it 表示“骑它”。

× I am so hard to learn that at the beginning, but finally I had learned how to write that I'm pressured.

✓ It was very hard for me to learn at the beginning, but finally I learned how to ride it, and I was proud of myself.

“I am hard to learn”结构不正确，因为真正“困难”的是学习这件事，而不是 I。应使用 It was hard for me to learn。表达“学会骑车”时，应使用 learn how to ride it。

× I am so hard to learn that at the beginning, but finally I had learned how to write that I'm pressured.

✓ It was very hard for me to learn at the beginning, but finally I learned how to ride it, and I was proud of myself.

这句话继续描述过去学骑车的经历，所以 am 应改为 was，had learned 在这里应改为 learned。讲述按时间顺序发生的过去事件时，通常使用一般过去时即可。

× I am so hard to learn that at the beginning, but finally I had learned how to write that I'm pressured.

✓ It was very hard for me to learn at the beginning, but finally I learned how to ride it, and I was proud of myself.

pressured 表示“感到有压力的”，不符合这里想表达的“感到自豪”。应使用 proud，并常说 proud of myself，表示“为自己感到自豪”。

× Yes it is absolutely popular in my country because my country has a lot of cars so in the morning and the evening it may have traffic jams, but the bike couldn't have.

✓ Yes, bikes are absolutely popular in my country because my country has a lot of cars, so there may be traffic jams in the morning and evening, but bikes do not cause them.

问题讨论的是一般意义上的自行车，因此使用复数 bikes。主语是复数时，be 动词应使用 are，而不是 is。

× Yes it is absolutely popular in my country because my country has a lot of cars so in the morning and the evening it may have traffic jams, but the bike couldn't have.

✓ Yes, bikes are absolutely popular in my country because my country has a lot of cars, so there may be traffic jams in the morning and evening, but bikes do not cause them.

表达“可能有交通堵塞”时，应使用 there may be traffic jams。there be 结构中，there 后面的名词是复数 traffic jams，所以使用 be，而不是 it may have。

× Yes it is absolutely popular in my country because my country has a lot of cars so in the morning and the evening it may have traffic jams, but the bike couldn't have.

✓ Yes, bikes are absolutely popular in my country because my country has a lot of cars, so there may be traffic jams in the morning and evening, but bikes do not cause them.

couldn't 表示过去的不能或不可能，不适合表达自行车不会造成交通堵塞。这里应使用一般现在时 bikes do not cause them，表示通常情况。

× Yes it is absolutely popular in my country because my country has a lot of cars so in the morning and the evening it may have traffic jams, but the bike couldn't have.

✓ Yes, bikes are absolutely popular in my country because my country has a lot of cars, so there may be traffic jams in the morning and evening, but bikes do not cause them.

it 没有清楚地指代正确的名词，而且 the bike 与前面的复数概念不一致。应直接使用 bikes，并用 them 指代前面提到的 traffic jams。

× Yes it is absolutely popular in my country because my country has a lot of cars so in the morning and the evening it may have traffic jams, but the bike couldn't have.

✓ Yes, bikes are absolutely popular in my country because my country has a lot of cars, so there may be traffic jams in the morning and evening, but bikes do not cause them.

because 和 so 都可以表示因果关系，但在同一个原因结果结构中同时使用会造成连接不自然。可以保留 because，并在后面使用逗号连接结果句。