Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer the question directly, then support your answer with specific details, as you did. However, correct the grammar and use natural expressions: say “when I was six or seven,” “that I loved,” and “around my neighborhood.” Since you are describing a childhood memory, use the past tense consistently. Your answer is well organized and includes an effective reason and personal example.

예시: Yes, I did. When I was six or seven, I had a blue bike that I loved, and I still have it today. I used to ride it around my neighborhood with my friends every afternoon. I especially remember speeding down the hill near my house because it was really exciting.

제안: Give a clear answer using the correct subject: “Yes, bikes are very popular in my country.” Avoid unclear or incorrect phrases such as “my car,” “practically quoted,” and “motorbike” when you mean “motorbikes.” Use a logical linking word such as “because” to explain why they are popular, and finish with a natural result phrase such as “As a result, they are common in cities.” Your main idea and reasons are relevant, but the grammatical and vocabulary errors make the response difficult to understand.

예시: Yes, bikes, especially motorbikes, are extremely popular in my country. Many people use them because they are affordable and convenient, particularly in cities with heavy traffic. They can move through narrow or crowded streets more easily than cars. As a result, you can see motorbikes almost everywhere in urban areas.

× Yes, when I washed about six to seven, I had a blue bike that I love and still have.

✓ Yes, when I was about six or seven, I had a blue bike that I loved and still have.

Washed is the past-tense form of wash, but the sentence needs was to describe the speaker's age. Because the story is mainly about the past, loved is also more consistent with the past-time context. However, still have remains in the present tense because the speaker still owns the bike.

× I used to ride it every afternoon with my friend along the neighborhood, and I remember speeding down the hill near my house because it felt so exciting.

✓ I used to ride it every afternoon with my friend around the neighborhood, and I remember speeding down the hill near my house because it felt so exciting.

Along is normally used for movement beside or following a line, such as along a road or along a river. Around the neighborhood is the natural prepositional phrase for riding in different parts of a neighborhood.

× Yes, my car actually very popular in my country, practically quoted on motorbike.

✓ Yes, motorbikes are actually very popular in my country, particularly compared with cars.

The plural subject motorbikes requires the plural verb are. The original sentence also appears to use my car as the subject even though the answer is discussing motorbikes. Make sure that the subject and verb agree in number, and check that the subject expresses the intended meaning.

× Yes, my car actually very popular in my country, practically quoted on motorbike.

✓ Yes, motorbikes are actually very popular in my country, particularly compared with cars.

The original sentence is incomplete because it does not contain a correctly formed subject-verb structure: my car ... very popular needs the verb is. The phrase practically quoted on motorbike is also not a meaningful grammatical expression in this context. Use a complete structure such as motorbikes are popular, followed by a clear comparison such as compared with cars.