Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer the question directly, then add a clear explanation and a specific detail. Correct “on food” to “on foot.” Also, “I still never owned one at that time” is awkward; say “I still didn’t own one.” Use a linking word such as “although” to connect the final idea smoothly.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bicycle when I was a child. I usually went everywhere on foot or took public transportation. I first rode a bike in eighth grade, after my family moved to a new neighborhood, although I still didn’t own one myself.

제안: Give a direct topic sentence and avoid fillers such as “uh.” Replace “the country I live in is mainly focused on 2 Wheelers” with “Two-wheelers are very popular in my country.” Correct “bike everywhere” to “people use them everywhere,” “Who is middle class” to “Most middle-class people,” and “the main modes ... is” to “one of the main modes ... is.” Add a specific reason or example to make the answer more effective.

예시: Yes, bikes are extremely popular in my country. Two-wheelers are one of the main modes of transportation, especially in crowded cities, because they are affordable and convenient. Most middle-class families own at least one, and people often use them to commute to work or school.

× I usually went everywhere on food.

✓ I usually went everywhere on foot.

The fixed expression for traveling by walking is on foot, not on food. Food refers to something we eat, whereas foot refers to the body part used for walking.

× I first rode a bike when I was in the eighth grade after we moved house, but I still never owned one at that time.

✓ I first rode a bike when I was in the eighth grade after we moved house, but I still did not own one at that time.

Did not own is the more appropriate past-tense form for describing a situation that was true at a specific time in the past. Still never owned is grammatically possible in some contexts but sounds unnatural here.

× Uh, that is bike everywhere.

✓ There are bikes everywhere.

Use there are to introduce the existence of plural things. The sentence should begin with There are rather than That is.

× Uh, that is bike everywhere.

✓ There are bikes everywhere.

Bike must be plural because the speaker is referring to bikes in general and uses the plural verb are. The natural plural form is bikes.

× Who is uh, middle class, uh, definitely owns a bike.

✓ People who are middle class definitely own a bike.

The original sentence does not have a complete and logical structure. It begins with who without clearly stating the people being described. Use People who are middle class as the subject, followed by the verb own.

× Who is uh, middle class, uh, definitely owns a bike.

✓ People who are middle class definitely own a bike.

The subject people is plural, so the verb must be the plural form own, not owns. Also, the relative clause should use are because who refers to plural people.

× The main modes of transportation is the 2 Wheeler.

✓ The main mode of transportation is a two-wheeler.

The sentence refers to one primary mode, so mode should be singular. The singular subject mode correctly takes the singular verb is.

× The main modes of transportation is the 2 Wheeler.

✓ The main mode of transportation is a two-wheeler.

A singular subject requires a singular verb. After changing modes to the singular form mode, is is grammatically correct.

× The main modes of transportation is the 2 Wheeler.

✓ The main mode of transportation is a two-wheeler.

Use the indefinite article a before two-wheeler when referring to one member of a general category. Two-wheeler should also be written in lowercase with a hyphen.