Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly in the first sentence: “No, I didn’t.” Then give one clear reason and a relevant present-day detail. Correct “when I was child” to “when I was a child,” and replace the confusing phrase “never let me sleep never allowed me” with “never allowed me to have one because she was concerned about my safety.” Use “recently” or “nowadays,” not “sooner,” and say “commute to work” or “get to work more easily” instead of “go for work easy.” Avoid repeating the same idea and separate the answer into two or three clear sentences.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my mother was concerned about my safety. However, I’m thinking about buying one now because it would make my commute to work easier and more convenient.

제안: Begin with a direct answer such as “Yes, they’re very popular.” Use the plural subject “bikes” with “they help,” and avoid repeating “it helps to.” The phrase “other mosquitoes” is incorrect and unclear; use “other forms of transport” or name specific alternatives such as “buses and cars.” Improve the article and phrasing in “the great option to have a bike with you” by saying “a great way to travel.” Add a specific supporting detail, such as avoiding traffic, reducing travel costs, or being environmentally friendly.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially in large cities. They help people avoid traffic and get to work faster than they would by car or bus. They’re also relatively inexpensive and environmentally friendly, so many people use them for their daily commute.

× I didn't have a bike when I was child.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The singular countable noun child needs the indefinite article a in this expression. Use a before a singular countable noun when referring to one person or thing in a general way.

× As for safety reasons, my mom never allowed me to have one.

✓ For safety reasons, my mom never allowed me to have one.

The preposition as is unnecessary here. The natural expression is for safety reasons.

× My mom never let me sleep never allowed me to have mine.

✓ My mom never allowed me to have one.

The original sentence contains two verbs that are incorrectly joined and repeats the same idea. Use one complete verb phrase with a clear object: allowed me to have one.

× But sooner I'm trying to have a bike for me.

✓ But soon, I'm going to try to get a bike.

The sentence refers to a future plan, so be going to is more appropriate than the present continuous form I'm trying. Also, soon is the correct adverb for a time shortly in the future; sooner normally requires a comparison.

× It makes me go for work easy.

✓ It will make it easier for me to get to work.

Easy is an adjective, but the original structure needs the comparative adjective easier after make it. The phrase get to work is also the natural expression for traveling to one's workplace.

× Bikes are really popular in my country because it helps to reach the workplace easier and faster.

✓ Bikes are really popular in my country because they help people reach their workplaces more easily and quickly.

The subject bikes is plural, so the pronoun must be they, not it, and the verb must be help, not helps. The plural pronoun their agrees with people, and the adverbs easily and quickly modify the verb reach.

× They help people reach the workplace easier and faster rather than other mosquitoes in my country.

✓ They help people reach their workplaces more easily and quickly than other forms of transportation in my country.

The comparison must be between bikes and another form of transportation. Mosquitoes are not a logical comparison object in this context. Use than, not rather than, when comparing how easily or quickly two forms of transportation help people travel.

× It is the great option to have a bike with you.

✓ It is a great option to have a bike with you.

Use the indefinite article a because great option is a singular countable noun referring to one possible choice. The definite article the would suggest that there is one specific, already identified best option.