Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答直接表达了“没有自行车”，但后半部分存在严重的语法和表达问题，例如“so my I cannot”和“let my neck to bite it”都不自然，也难以理解。建议使用清晰的句子说明事故造成的具体影响，例如颈部受伤、不能进行剧烈运动，因此无法骑自行车。可以用“because”和“as a result”连接原因和结果，并避免过长的句子。

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. When I was ten, I was involved in a car accident and seriously injured my neck. As a result, I had to avoid strenuous activities, so I couldn’t ride a bike.

제안: 回答有明确观点，也提供了街上自行车很多以及用于送餐的细节，但“go on the stretch”应改为“walk along the street”，“I saw”应根据一般性观点改为“I see”，“like a local bike”和“the local bike”表达不准确。建议具体说明共享单车或电动自行车，并使用现在时描述普遍现象；还可以补充它们受欢迎的原因，例如方便、便宜和适合短途出行。

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. When I walk along the street, I often see many bicycles, especially shared bikes and electric bikes. They are convenient and affordable, and many delivery workers use them to deliver food. They are also a practical way to travel short distances.

× I didn't have a bike when I was a child because when I was ten I had a car accident and almost lost my mobility so my I cannot use a lot of energy to let my neck to bite it.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child because, when I was ten, I had a car accident and almost lost my mobility, so I couldn't use a lot of energy to ride a bike.

“my I”中同时错误地使用了物主代词“my”和主格代词“I”。这里需要使用主格代词“I”作主语，不能说“my I”。另外，“to let my neck to bite it”表达不自然；根据语境，应改为“to ride a bike”。

× I didn't have a bike when I was a child because when I was ten I had a car accident and almost lost my mobility so my I cannot use a lot of energy to let my neck to bite it.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child because, when I was ten, I had a car accident and almost lost my mobility, so I couldn't use a lot of energy to ride a bike.

整句话描述的是童年时期和十岁时发生的事情，因此应该使用过去时。“cannot”是现在时，应改为过去时“couldn't”，与前面的“didn't have”“was”和“had”保持一致。

× I didn't have a bike when I was a child because when I was ten I had a car accident and almost lost my mobility so my I cannot use a lot of energy to let my neck to bite it.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child because, when I was ten, I had a car accident and almost lost my mobility, so I couldn't use a lot of energy to ride a bike.

原句中“so my I cannot use...”结构混乱，而且“let”后面不能接“to + 动词”。表达“骑自行车”时应直接使用“ride a bike”。同时，适当添加逗号可以使原因、时间和结果之间的关系更清楚。

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because when I go on the stretch I saw a lot of bicycles like a local bike and the people will use the local bike to do the delivery.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because when I go on the street, I see a lot of bicycles, such as local bikes, and people use local bikes to make deliveries.

这句话描述的是经常发生的情况，应该使用一般现在时。“saw”是过去时，应改为“see”，与“go”保持一致。注意表达习惯性事实时，主句和从句通常都使用一般现在时。

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because when I go on the stretch I saw a lot of bicycles like a local bike and the people will use the local bike to do the delivery.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because when I go on the street, I see a lot of bicycles, such as local bikes, and people use local bikes to make deliveries.

“will use”表示将来发生的事情，但这里描述的是人们通常使用自行车送货的习惯，不是未来计划。因此应使用一般现在时“use”，而不是“will use”。

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because when I go on the stretch I saw a lot of bicycles like a local bike and the people will use the local bike to do the delivery.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because when I go on the street, I see a lot of bicycles, such as local bikes, and people use local bikes to make deliveries.

“a lot of bicycles”表示数量很多，因此后面举例时使用复数“local bikes”更合适。“local bike”是单数形式，和前面的复数概念不一致。表示多次送货时，“deliveries”也比单数“the delivery”更自然。

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because when I go on the stretch I saw a lot of bicycles like a local bike and the people will use the local bike to do the delivery.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because when I go on the street, I see a lot of bicycles, such as local bikes, and people use local bikes to make deliveries.

“people”表示泛指的人，不需要在前面加定冠词“the”。“the people”通常表示特定的一群人。这里是在泛泛地谈人们的习惯，所以应说“people”。