Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer the question directly instead of repeating it. Begin with a clear topic sentence, such as “Yes, I did” or “No, I didn’t,” and then add one or two specific details about the bike, how often you used it, or where you rode it. Use a linking word such as “because” or “so” to connect your ideas naturally.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was about eight years old, and I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends. It was a simple bike, but I really enjoyed using it after school.

제안: Give your opinion directly rather than repeating the examiner’s question. Start with “Yes, I think they are” or “Not really,” and support your answer with specific information about who uses bikes, where they use them, and why. Include a linking word such as “especially,” “because,” or “however” to make your response coherent.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and people who exercise regularly. Many people ride them in parks or on dedicated bike lanes because they are convenient and environmentally friendly. However, heavy traffic can make cycling difficult in some cities.