Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer the question directly using the past tense because the question asks about your childhood. Avoid repetition such as “I usually, I usually” and “bike” several times. Use a clear structure: give a direct answer, explain who you rode with, and add a specific detail about where or when you rode. Link your ideas with words such as “usually,” “especially,” or “because.” Also, say “ride my bike” rather than “ride a bike” when referring to your own bike.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and I really enjoyed riding it. I usually went cycling with my parents around my city, especially on weekends. We often rode in a nearby park because the roads there were safer and quieter.

제안: Make your answer more coherent by clearly contrasting your city with the rest of the country. Avoid repeating “I think” and “bike,” and correct the sentence fragment “They the bike.” Use “cycling” or “riding a bike” when discussing the activity as a sport. Support your opinion with specific reasons: it is affordable, accessible, healthy, and convenient, or the roads are suitable for cyclists. Use linking words such as “however,” “outside my city,” and “because.”

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, although they are less common in my city. Outside the city, many people go cycling for exercise, and some even use bikes for commuting. Cycling is popular because it is affordable, accessible, and healthy, while many roads in those areas are suitable for cyclists.

× Yes, I do have a bike and I really enjoy riding my bike.

✓ Yes, I did have a bike, and I really enjoyed riding it.

The question asks about the past: Did you have a bike when you were a child? Therefore, the answer should use the past tense: did have and enjoyed. The pronoun it avoids repeating my bike.

× I usually, I usually ride my bike with my parents and I went out to ride a bike around my city.

✓ I usually rode my bike with my parents, and I went cycling around my city.

Because the question refers to childhood, the verbs should be in the past tense. Use rode instead of ride. The repeated phrase I usually is also removed, and went cycling is a natural past-tense expression.

× But I do think that outside of my city I think bike is really famous.

✓ But I do think that bikes are really popular outside my city.

Bike is a singular countable noun, so it cannot be used without an article. However, when speaking about bikes in general, the plural form bikes is more appropriate. Also, popular is the natural adjective for something that many people like or use; famous is usually used for well-known people, places, or things.

× They the bike is one of the most popular sports here.

✓ Biking is one of the most popular sports here.

The sentence contains an unnecessary subject, They, and the structure they the bike is is ungrammatical. Biking is a suitable subject because the speaker is referring to the sport or activity, not to one individual bike.

× Umm besides running because it is easy to access and the roads are supporting as well.

✓ Besides running, biking is popular because it is easy to access, and the roads support it as well.

The original phrase is incomplete because Besides running does not clearly connect to the main clause. Adding biking is popular creates a complete sentence with a clear subject and verb. The pronoun it refers to biking.