Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời đi thẳng vào câu hỏi và có lý do, nhưng có nhiều lỗi dùng từ và ngữ pháp. “pie” cần sửa thành “bike”, “I have” nên dùng thì quá khứ “I had”, và “my parents were bought for me” nên sửa thành “my parents bought one for me”. Hãy thêm một chi tiết cụ thể như thời điểm bạn bắt đầu đi xe hoặc mục đích sử dụng để câu trả lời tự nhiên và đầy đủ hơn.

예시: Yes, definitely. I had a bike when I was a child because my parents bought one for me when I was about seven. I used to ride it around my neighborhood with my friends.

제안: Bạn đã nêu được ý chính và một số mục đích sử dụng xe đạp, nhưng câu trả lời còn nhiều lỗi khiến ý khó hiểu. “The price is very popular” không phù hợp với ngữ cảnh; nên nói “Bikes are very popular in Vietnam”. Sửa “bike” thành “bikes”, “bias” thành “bikes”, thêm mạo từ trong “the countryside” và “cities”, đồng thời hoàn chỉnh phần lý do sau “because”. Nên dùng từ nối như “especially” hoặc “because” để liên kết các ý và đưa ra một chi tiết cụ thể về sự khác biệt giữa nông thôn và thành phố.

예시: Yes, absolutely. Bikes are quite popular in Vietnam, especially in the countryside, where people often use them to go to school, work, or local markets. They are affordable and convenient, although motorbikes are more common in big cities.

× I have a pie because my parents were bought for me.

✓ I had a bike because my parents bought it for me.

The question asks about your childhood, so the past tense had is needed instead of have. Also, bought should be used in the active voice because the parents performed the action.

× I have a pie because my parents were bought for me.

✓ I had a bike because my parents bought it for me.

Were bought incorrectly means that someone bought the parents. The intended meaning is that the parents bought the bike, so use the active structure my parents bought it.

× I have a pie because my parents were bought for me.

✓ I had a bike because my parents bought it for me.

The pronoun it refers to the bike and is needed as the object of bought. Use it instead of leaving the object unclear.

× The price is very popular in my country is Vietnam.

✓ Bikes are very popular in my country, Vietnam.

The original sentence contains two clauses joined incorrectly. Use one complete clause with bikes as the subject and are as the verb. The word price does not express the intended meaning.

× People use bike to go to school or sometimes go to work.

✓ People use bikes to go to school or sometimes go to work.

Bike is a countable noun used in a general statement, so it should be plural: bikes. Alternatively, you could say a bike if you mean one bicycle.

× But I think bias is more popular in countryside than city because.

✓ But I think bikes are more popular in the countryside than in the city.

Bikes is plural, so it must be followed by are, not is. The word bias appears to be a spelling or word-choice error for bikes.

× But I think bias is more popular in countryside than city because.

✓ But I think bikes are more popular in the countryside than in the city.

Use the definite article the in the countryside and the city when referring to these general geographical areas. The preposition in is also repeated before the city for a balanced comparison.

× But I think bias is more popular in countryside than city because.

✓ But I think bikes are more popular in the countryside than in the city.

Because introduces a reason and must be followed by a complete clause. Since no reason is provided, remove because. If you want to use it, add a clause such as because there are fewer cars.