Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear, direct, and grammatically accurate. To make it more developed and natural for IELTS Part 1, add a brief detail about whether you used other people's bikes or why you did not have one. This would provide a stronger supporting idea without making the answer too long.

예시: I don’t remember having my own bike when I was a child. I occasionally borrowed my cousin’s bike, but I didn’t ride it very often because my parents were worried about my safety.

제안: Your main idea is understandable, but the sentence contains repetition and grammatical errors, especially “most of the people are all you are all the using.” Say “most people use motorcycles” instead. Also, use a clear structure: give your opinion first, then explain the reason and, if possible, mention a specific comparison between bikes and motorcycles.

예시: I don’t think bicycles are very popular in my country nowadays because most people prefer to use motorcycles. Motorcycles are faster and more convenient for commuting, especially in crowded cities. However, bicycles are becoming more popular among people who exercise or want to protect the environment.

× Nowadays, I don't think bikes are still popular in our country because most of the people are all you are all the using a motorcycle.

✓ Nowadays, I don't think bikes are still popular in our country because most people use motorcycles.

The phrase 'are all you are all the using' contains repeated and incorrectly arranged words, which makes the sentence structure ungrammatical. Use the simple present form 'use' to describe a general situation. A clear sentence structure is: subject + verb + object.

× Nowadays, I don't think bikes are still popular in our country because most of the people are all you are all the using a motorcycle.

✓ Nowadays, I don't think bikes are still popular in our country because most people use motorcycles.

The subject 'most people' refers to more than one person, so the general object should be plural: 'motorcycles,' not 'a motorcycle.' Use the plural form when speaking about motorcycles in general.