Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Use the past tense consistently: say “had” and “enjoyed” instead of “have” and “enjoy.” Begin with a direct answer, then add a specific detail about where, when, or why you rode the bike. Also, use the more natural phrase “in the park” or “at parks” depending on your meaning.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it in the park with my cousins, especially on weekends. It was a fun way for us to spend time together and get some exercise.

제안: Give a clear reason without using the outdated phrase “third world country”; “developing country” or “many people have limited incomes” is more appropriate. Avoid repeating ideas such as “because” and “that’s why,” and remove the unfinished sentence at the end. Use linking words such as “also” or “in addition” to add a specific example, such as bicycles being useful for commuting or avoiding traffic.

예시: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in the Philippines. Many people use them because they are affordable and convenient, especially for short trips. They also help commuters avoid heavy traffic in crowded cities.

× I have a bike when I was a child.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child.

The phrase when I was a child refers to a completed time in the past, so the past-tense form had is required instead of the present-tense form have.

× I enjoy riding it at the parks with my cousins.

✓ I enjoyed riding it in parks with my cousins.

The examiner asks about a past experience during childhood, so enjoyed is more appropriate than enjoy. Use the past tense consistently when describing activities from that period.

× I enjoy riding it at the parks with my cousins.

✓ I enjoyed riding it in parks with my cousins.

The preposition in is more appropriate for riding or spending time inside parks. At is usually used for a general location or point, such as at the station.

× Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because Philippines is a third world country and we mainly cannot afford cars, that's why we have bikes.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because the Philippines is a third-world country and we mainly cannot afford cars. That is why we have bikes.

The country name requires the definite article the: the Philippines. Country names containing a plural form or referring to a group of islands commonly use the definite article.

× Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because Philippines is a third world country and we mainly cannot afford cars, that's why we have bikes.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because the Philippines is a third-world country and we mainly cannot afford cars. That is why we have bikes.

Because already introduces the reason, so using that's why in the same sentence creates a redundant conjunction structure. Use because to give the reason, or use That is why to state the result in a separate sentence.

× It was it just for for.

✓ They were just for transportation.

The pronoun it is singular, but it appears to refer to bikes, which is plural. Use they with the plural verb were. The corrected sentence also makes the intended meaning clear.

× It was it just for for.

✓ They were just for transportation.

The original sentence contains repeated words and does not form a clear grammatical structure. A complete sentence needs a clear subject, an appropriate verb, and a meaningful complement.