Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly and use correct past-tense grammar. Say “I didn’t have” rather than “I didn’t had,” and use “couldn’t afford to buy me a bike” instead of “couldn’t afford any good bike to me.” Avoid mixing several forms and ideas: “I usually used to roam” and “sometimes I do prefer walking” should be changed to “I usually travelled by scooter or bicycle, and sometimes I walked.” Also, clarify whether you had access to a bicycle, because the answer first says you did not have one but later says you used one. Use one or two specific supporting details and a clear linking word such as “because” or “instead.”

예시: No, I didn’t have my own bike when I was a child because my parents couldn’t afford to buy me one. Instead, I usually travelled by scooter or bicycle, and sometimes I walked. I didn’t mind because most places in my neighborhood were quite close.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence such as “Yes, bikes are very popular in my country.” Avoid fillers such as “uh,” repetition, and the vague phrase “in the country.” Use precise vocabulary: people “ride” bikes rather than “carry” them, and “there are many affordable models” is more natural than “there are affordable options for bikes.” Add a specific reason or example, such as commuting, convenience, or low cost, and finish confidently instead of ending with “but, yeah.”

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially among students and commuters. Many people choose them because they are affordable, convenient, and cheaper to maintain than cars. In crowded cities, bikes also make it easier to avoid traffic.

× No, when I was a child I didn't had any bike because my parents couldn't afford any good bike to me and I usually used to roam around in an activa or a cycle or sometimes I do prefer walking.

✓ No, when I was a child, I didn't have a bike because my parents couldn't afford a good bike for me, and I usually used to roam around on an Activa or a bicycle. Sometimes, I preferred walking.

After the past auxiliary did not, the main verb must be in its base form: didn't have, not didn't had. The phrase afford a bike for me requires the preposition for, and preferred is more suitable than do prefer because the answer is describing a past habit.

× No, when I was a child I didn't had any bike because my parents couldn't afford any good bike to me and I usually used to roam around in an activa or a cycle or sometimes I do prefer walking.

✓ No, when I was a child, I didn't have a bike because my parents couldn't afford a good bike for me, and I usually used to roam around on an Activa or a bicycle. Sometimes, I preferred walking.

We normally use afford something for someone, not afford something to someone. We also use on with vehicles such as an Activa or a bicycle when referring to riding them.

× No, when I was a child I didn't had any bike because my parents couldn't afford any good bike to me and I usually used to roam around in an activa or a cycle or sometimes I do prefer walking.

✓ No, when I was a child, I didn't have a bike because my parents couldn't afford a good bike for me, and I usually used to roam around on an Activa or a bicycle. Sometimes, I preferred walking.

The question asks about the speaker's childhood, so the actions should remain in the past tense. Use preferred instead of do prefer when describing a past preference or habit.

× In the country, I would say yeah, definitely. People really prefer bikes here and uh, I mean, there are affordable options for bikes in my country and uh, many people carry them or ride them out of them, but uh, yeah.

✓ In my country, I would say yes, definitely. People really prefer bikes here, and there are affordable options. Many people own them or ride them for transportation.

The expression ride them out of them uses an incorrect and unnecessary prepositional phrase. Ride them is sufficient, or ride them for transportation clearly explains their use.