Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 시제와 문장 구조를 정확하게 사용해야 합니다. 과거의 경험을 묻는 질문이므로 “Yes, I did.”라고 답해야 하며, “was good at biking than me”는 “was better at biking than I was”로 고치는 것이 자연스럽습니다. 또한 두 문장을 쉼표만으로 연결하지 말고 접속사나 관계대명사를 사용하세요. 마지막의 “great thinking”은 의미상 “great memory”가 적절합니다. 답변은 과거의 구체적인 활동이나 느낀 점을 한 가지 더 추가하면 더욱 효과적입니다.

예시: Yes, I did. I used to ride my bike with my younger brother, who was better at biking than I was. We often rode around our neighborhood after school, so it remains a great childhood memory.

제안: 전반적으로 질문에 직접 답하고 이유와 관찰을 제시해 기본 구조가 좋습니다. 다만 일반적인 사람들을 말할 때는 “a bike”보다 “bikes” 또는 “their bikes”가 자연스럽고, “go their work”는 “go to work”로 수정해야 합니다. “work, school, or the supermarket”처럼 병렬 구조와 관사를 정확하게 사용하세요. 또한 “For example”이나 “because”를 사용해 자전거가 인기 있는 구체적인 이유나 장소를 덧붙이면 연결성과 내용의 구체성이 향상됩니다.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in Korea. Many people ride them to work, school, or the supermarket, especially in cities with well-developed bike paths. For example, I often see people cycling along the Han River on weekends.

× Yes I have, I used my bike with my younger brother, he was good at biking than me.

✓ Yes, I did. I rode my bike with my younger brother.

The question uses the simple past tense, Did you have...? Therefore, the short answer should use did, not have. Use the same tense as the auxiliary verb in the question.

× he was good at biking than me.

✓ He was better at biking than I was.

When comparing two people, use the comparative form better, not good. The structure better ... than is required for this comparison. Than I was is more grammatically complete than than me in formal English.

× People use a bike when they want to go their work, school or supermarket.

✓ People use bikes when they want to go to work, school, or the supermarket.

The subject People refers to people in general, so the plural noun bikes is more appropriate than the singular expression a bike. Use plural nouns when discussing a general habit.

× People use a bike when they want to go their work, school or supermarket.

✓ People use bikes when they want to go to work, school, or the supermarket.

The verb go requires the preposition to when referring to a destination. Say go to work, go to school, and go to the supermarket, not go their work.

× People use a bike when they want to go their work, school or supermarket.

✓ People use bikes when they want to go to work, school, or the supermarket.

Work and school are commonly used without an article when referring to their usual purposes. Supermarket is a singular countable noun, so it needs an article; the supermarket is the natural expression for a specific type of destination.