Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答只是重复了考官的问题，没有直接回答“是”或“不是”，因此无法展示词汇、语法和连贯性。建议先明确回答，例如“Yes, I did.”或“No, I didn’t.”，然后补充一到两个具体细节，如自行车的颜色、使用场景或当时的感受。注意不要重复考官的问题。

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bike when I was about seven. I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends after school.

제안: 你的回答重复了问题，而且把“bikes”误说成了“banks”，没有表达自己的观点。建议先直接回答“Yes, I think they are”或“No, not really”，然后使用because或especially等连接词说明原因，并加入具体例子，例如通勤、锻炼或共享单车。回答应围绕自行车，而不是银行。

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in large cities. Many people ride them for exercise or to avoid traffic jams. In addition, bike-sharing services are convenient and affordable for short trips.