Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Use the past tense because you are talking about your childhood: say “I had,” not “I have.” State the answer directly, describe the bike clearly, and finish your sentence. Avoid unclear phrases such as “herculus to wheela”; you may mean “a Hercules two-wheeler.” Add one specific detail about how or where you used it.

예시: Yes, I had a Hercules bicycle when I was a child. It was a simple two-wheeler, and I always wore a helmet when I rode it. I usually cycled around my neighborhood after school.

제안: Your answer gives a clear opinion and a reason, but it contains several grammar and word-choice errors. Use “children use bicycles at school and in playgrounds” instead of “children are going to using bicycles on at school and playing grounds.” Also say “most children” and “in their free time.” Organize the answer with a linking word such as “Additionally” and include a specific example of how people use bikes.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among children. Many children ride them to school, in playgrounds, and around their neighborhoods. Additionally, some adults use bicycles for short journeys because they are inexpensive and convenient.

× Yes, I have a bike in my childhood.

✓ Yes, I had a bike during my childhood.

The question asks about a past time, so use the past-tense form had instead of the present-tense form have. During my childhood is also a natural expression for referring to a period in the past.

× It is a herculus two-wheeler.

✓ It was a Hercules two-wheeler.

Because the bike was owned during the speaker's childhood, the verb should be in the past tense: was, not is.

× And I have a helmet that

✓ I also had a helmet.

The original sentence ends with that, but no information follows it to complete the clause. Remove the incomplete relative clause and use a complete sentence. Since the answer refers to childhood, use had.

× Children are going to using bicycles.

✓ Children use bicycles.

After be going to, use the base form of the verb: are going to use, not are going to using. However, because this sentence describes a general habit, the simple present use is more appropriate.

× Children use bicycles on at school and playing grounds.

✓ Children use bicycles at school and on playgrounds.

Use at with school and on with playgrounds. The phrase playing grounds is not the natural expression here; playgrounds is the appropriate noun.

× Most of child are using bicycle.

✓ Most children use bicycles.

After most, use the plural noun children, not the singular noun child. Bicycles should also be plural because the statement refers to bicycles generally.

× Most children are using bicycles to travel in their times.

✓ Most children use bicycles to travel in their free time.

The sentence describes a regular or general activity, so use the simple present use rather than the present progressive are using. Free time is the natural expression for this meaning.