Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is direct, natural, and grammatically clear. To make it more effective, avoid the informal filler “like” and add one specific supporting detail, such as where you learned or how you felt. Use a smoother linker such as “I remember that…” to extend the answer naturally.

예시: Yes, I did. My dad taught me how to ride when I was about five or six years old. I remember practicing in a quiet park near our home, and I was really proud when I finally managed to ride on my own.

제안: Your main idea is clear, but there are several vocabulary and grammar problems. Use “they are” instead of “it is” because “bikes” is plural, and replace “nationwidely” with “nationwide.” “CTCBD” is unclear and should probably be “central business districts,” while “bag” should be “bike,” and “can hear us get access” should be “helps us get around.” Avoid repeating “in China,” and organize the reason with a clear linker such as “This is because.”

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in China, especially in large cities. This is because many central business districts have narrow, crowded streets, so cycling is often more convenient than driving. In addition, bike-sharing services make it easy for people to travel short distances.

× Yes, it is very popular in China nationwidely because in the CTCBD there are quite a lot narrow streets in China, so riding a bag can hear us get access to other places very conveniently.

✓ Yes, they are very popular in China nationwide because in the CTCBD there are quite a lot of narrow streets in China, so riding a bike can help us get access to other places very conveniently.

The noun bikes is plural, so it should be referred to with they, not it. Use they are instead of it is. Suggestion: Always check whether the pronoun agrees with the noun in number.

× Yes, it is very popular in China nationwidely because in the CTCBD there are quite a lot narrow streets in China, so riding a bag can hear us get access to other places very conveniently.

✓ Yes, they are very popular in China nationwide because in the CTCBD there are quite a lot of narrow streets in China, so riding a bike can help us get access to other places very conveniently.

Bikes is plural, so the verb must be are, not is. The correct form is they are very popular. Suggestion: Identify the subject first, then choose a singular or plural verb.

× Yes, it is very popular in China nationwidely because in the CTCBD there are quite a lot narrow streets in China, so riding a bag can hear us get access to other places very conveniently.

✓ Yes, they are very popular in China nationwide because in the CTCBD there are quite a lot of narrow streets in China, so riding a bike can help us get access to other places very conveniently.

Nationwidely is not the correct adverb. Nationwide can function as an adverb and means throughout the country. Suggestion: Use nationwide rather than adding -ly to the adjective national.

× Yes, it is very popular in China nationwidely because in the CTCBD there are quite a lot narrow streets in China, so riding a bag can hear us get access to other places very conveniently.

✓ Yes, they are very popular in China nationwide because in the CTCBD there are quite a lot of narrow streets in China, so riding a bike can help us get access to other places very conveniently.

Quite a lot must be followed by of before a plural countable noun. Therefore, say quite a lot of narrow streets. Suggestion: Use quite a lot of with plural countable nouns and uncountable nouns.

× Yes, it is very popular in China nationwidely because in the CTCBD there are quite a lot narrow streets in China, so riding a bag can hear us get access to other places very conveniently.

✓ Yes, they are very popular in China nationwide because in the CTCBD there are quite a lot of narrow streets in China, so riding a bike can help us get access to other places very conveniently.

Can hear us get access is not an appropriate verb structure for this meaning. Use help us get access, in which help is followed by an object and the base form of the verb. Also, bike is the appropriate noun in this context, not bag. Suggestion: Use can help us + base verb to explain how something makes an activity easier.