Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly, but add a brief reason or supporting detail. For example, explain whether you preferred another form of transportation or why you did not have a bike. A two-sentence response would sound more natural and complete.

예시: No, I didn’t. My parents thought cycling was unsafe in our neighborhood, so I usually walked or took the bus instead.

제안: Use the correct word “bikes,” not “bites,” and replace the unnatural phrase “In my observation” with “In my experience” or “From what I’ve seen.” Also, answer in the present tense and add a specific reason or example to support your opinion.

예시: From what I’ve seen, bikes aren’t very popular in my country. Most people prefer to drive because the roads are busy and there aren’t many dedicated bike lanes.

× In my observation there were not many bites in my country.

✓ In my observation, there are not many bikes in my country.

The question asks about the current popularity of bikes, so the present tense are is more appropriate than the past tense were. The word bites should be bikes because the topic is bicycles. A comma is also used after the introductory phrase In my observation.