Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 先直接回答，然后补充一个具体细节。注意使用正确的过去时："rode"，而不是 "rider"；"my friend had one" 比 "my friend had that" 更自然。还要在转折处使用逗号或连接词，使句子更清晰。

예시: No, I didn’t. However, my best friend had one, and I often rode it with him around our neighborhood after school.

제안: 回答中有较多影响理解的词汇和语法错误。应使用准确词汇，如 "bikes"、"ride a bike" 和 "improve our health"；"school, work or exercise" 要保持词性一致。建议先说明自行车很受欢迎，再用现在时解释用途和健康好处，并使用 "because" 或 "also" 连接观点。

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them to school or work, while others use them for exercise. They are convenient, affordable, and good for our health.

× No, I didn't but my friend had that I often rider the bike with him

✓ No, I didn't, but my friend had a bike, and I often rode it with him.

“my friend had that”结构不完整，that不能连接这里的两个分句。应在“had”后补充名词“a bike”，并用“and”连接后面的分句，使句子结构完整。

× No, I didn't but my friend had that I often rider the bike with him

✓ No, I didn't, but my friend had a bike, and I often rode it with him.

问题发生在过去的童年时期，所以动词应使用过去式。“rider”不是正确的动词形式，应该使用“ride”的过去式“rode”。建议记忆常见不规则动词：ride—rode—ridden。

× No, I didn't but my friend had that I often rider the bike with him

✓ No, I didn't, but my friend had a bike, and I often rode it with him.

“that”在这里不能代替前面提到的自行车。用“it”指代单数名词“a bike”，因此应说“rode it with him”。

× Many people use the eater to go into school, working or training and it was so a way to cable our health.

✓ Many people use bikes to go to school, work, or train, and it is a good way to improve our health.

表示去学校这一目的地时，通常使用“go to school”，而不是“go into school”。“go into”通常表示进入建筑物或进入某个空间。

× Many people use the eater to go into school, working or training and it was so a way to cable our health.

✓ Many people use bikes to go to school, work, or train, and it is a good way to improve our health.

“to go ..., working or training”中的成分不平行。列举目的时，应使用相同形式：“to go to school, work, or train”。同时，句子需要用逗号和“and”清楚地连接两个分句。

× Many people use the eater to go into school, working or training and it was so a way to cable our health.

✓ Many people use bikes to go to school, work, or train, and it is a good way to improve our health.

题目问的是现在本国自行车的普及情况，描述一般事实时应使用一般现在时。“was”是过去式，应改为“is”。一般现在时还要注意主语和动词的搭配。

× Many people use the eater to go into school, working or training and it was so a way to cable our health.

✓ Many people use bikes to go to school, work, or train, and it is a good way to improve our health.

“so a way”不能正确修饰名词短语。这里应使用形容词“good”描述“way”，表达“这是改善健康的好方法”。