Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer the question directly and explain your answer with one or two specific details. The phrase “it's my first” is unclear; say whether you had a bike and describe when or how you used it. Avoid unnecessary fillers such as “OK.”

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was my first bike, and I got it when I was about seven. I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.

제안: Give a clear yes-or-no answer first, then provide a logical reason and a specific example. The current response is difficult to understand because of inaccurate word choices and incomplete grammar, such as “make it in furth problem.” Use linking words like “because,” “especially,” or “for example” to connect your ideas.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and people who want to exercise. They are also a convenient way to travel short distances because they are inexpensive and environmentally friendly. For example, many people ride bicycles in parks or use them to commute.

× Yeah, it's my first. OK.

✓ Yeah, it was my first bike.

The question refers to the student's childhood, so the answer should use the past tense. Use was instead of is or it's. Adding bike makes the meaning complete and clear.

× Yes, there are probably lots of people make it in furth problem and it will unfortunately

✓ Yes, there are probably lots of people who ride bikes in my country, and this will unfortunately cause problems.

The original sentence is incomplete and contains an unclear phrase. After people, use the relative pronoun who before the verb ride. The phrase will unfortunately also needs a main verb, such as cause. A complete sentence should express a clear subject, verb, and meaning.