Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
수험생
Yes I did, I had a bike when I was a child and uh, I really enjoyed writing it and also uh, now I am writing too because it's uh, helps, it helps to enjoy and uh.
시험관
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
수험생
Yes, I think in my country a lot of people enjoys uh, uh, writing because, uh, it's very popular and also in the summer, in autumn, uh, all peoples, uh, ride on it because, uh, of weather.
평가
총점
Part 1
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
점수: 55.0제안: Ответ начинается прямо, но содержит повторение “I had a bike when I was a child”, длительные паузы и незавершённую мысль. Используйте правильное слово “riding”, а не “writing”, и форму “it helps me relax” или “it is enjoyable” вместо “it helps to enjoy”. Постройте ответ из 2–3 предложений: прямой ответ, причина и дополнительная деталь о настоящем времени. Избегайте повторения “uh” и закончите предложение ясно.
예시: Yes, I did. I had a blue bike when I was a child, and I really enjoyed riding it around my neighborhood. I still ride a bike occasionally because it helps me relax and stay active.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
점수: 58.0제안: Основная идея понятна, но есть ошибки в согласовании: “a lot of people enjoy”, “all people” или “everyone”, а также нужно использовать “riding”, не “writing”. Фраза “because it’s very popular” повторяет вопрос и не объясняет причину. Уточните, кто именно ездит на велосипедах и почему: например, дети, студенты или люди, которые используют велосипед для транспорта и отдыха. Используйте связки “especially”, “because” и “although”; также правильнее сказать “in summer and autumn” и “because the weather is pleasant”.
예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among children and young adults. Many people ride them in summer and autumn because the weather is pleasant and cycling is an inexpensive way to travel. However, fewer people cycle in winter because of the cold weather.
문법
× it's helps
✓ it helps
The subject it is third-person singular, so the verb should be helps. The form it's means it is and cannot be followed by helps in this sentence.
× a lot of people enjoys
✓ a lot of people enjoy
People is a plural noun, so it takes the plural verb enjoy, not the third-person singular form enjoys.
× all peoples
✓ all people
People is already the plural form of person. Peoples is used only when referring to different ethnic or national groups, so all people is correct here.
× because of weather
✓ because of the weather
The speaker is referring to the specific weather conditions in the country and season, so the definite article the is needed before weather.
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