Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答有清晰的经历和细节，但有多处词汇和语法问题，影响自然度。应直接说“I had a small bicycle”，而不是“a little better call”；“set up two lights on pedals”应改为“attached two lights to the handlebars/wheels”；“safer than old one”前需要加“the”，并说明比较对象；“convenient to me to where I want to go”应改为“made it convenient for me to get around”。此外，最后一句可以具体说明自行车帮助你去哪里。

예시: Yes, I had a small bicycle when I was a child. My parents bought it for me as a birthday present, and I attached two lights to it so I could ride more safely in the evening. It was also convenient because I could ride it to school or to my friends’ houses.

제안: 回答观点明确，也提到了使用场景和环保原因，但“pentacles”应为“bicycles/bikes”，“in country”应为“in my country”；“use bicycle”需要改为“use bicycles”，并且“to where they want to go”不自然，应改为“to get to places such as work, parks and shopping malls”。“bicycle are”应为“bicycles are”，建议使用更自然的表达“a greener form of transport that helps reduce carbon emissions”。可以补充一个具体群体或城市情况，使内容更有说服力。

예시: Yes, bikes are still quite popular in my country, especially in large cities. Many people use them to commute to work or to travel to nearby parks and shopping malls. In addition, bikes are a greener form of transport because they help reduce traffic congestion and carbon emissions.

× I also set up two lights on pedals.

✓ I also set up two lights on the pedals.

“pedals”在这里指这辆自行车的特定脚蹬，需要使用定冠词“the”。

× It would be safer than old one.

✓ It was safer than the old one.

整段是在描述童年时的自行车，应该使用一般过去时“was”，而不是“would be”。“would be”通常表示假设或过去将来。

× It would be safer than old one.

✓ It was safer than the old one.

“old one”特指之前提到的旧自行车，因此需要在“old one”前加定冠词“the”。

× Additionally, it was convenient to me to where I want to go.

✓ Additionally, it was convenient for me to go wherever I wanted to go.

固定搭配是“convenient for someone”，不能使用“convenient to someone”。此外，“to where I want to go”结构不自然，应改为“to go wherever I wanted to go”。

× Additionally, it was convenient to me to where I want to go.

✓ Additionally, it was convenient for me to go wherever I wanted to go.

“convenient to me to where...”的句子结构不完整且不自然。可以使用“it was convenient for me to + 动词原形”，并用“wherever”表示“无论去哪里”。

× Additionally, it was convenient to me to where I want to go.

✓ Additionally, it was convenient for me to go wherever I wanted to go.

前文是在讲过去的经历，所以“want”应改为过去式“wanted”，以保持时态一致。

× Yes, pentacles are still popular in country.

✓ Yes, bicycles are still popular in my country.

“country”前需要限定词。这里说的是“我的国家”，所以应使用物主限定词“my”。“pentacles”不是符合语境的自行车名词，应改为“bicycles”。

× Most people use bicycle to where they want to go, like workplace parks and shopping malls.

✓ Most people use bicycles to go to places they want to visit, such as workplaces, parks, and shopping malls.

“bicycle”是可数名词。主语“Most people”表示多数人，泛指自行车时应使用复数“bicycles”。另外，“to where”结构不自然，改为“to go to places”更合适。

× Most people use bicycle to where they want to go, like workplace parks and shopping malls.

✓ Most people use bicycles to go to places they want to visit, such as workplaces, parks, and shopping malls.

“use bicycle to where...”的结构错误。表达“使用自行车去某些地方”时，应使用“use bicycles to go to...”。列举地点时，可以使用“such as”。

× Additionally, bicycle are environmentally friendly tools helping reduce the carbon dioxide emission.

✓ Additionally, bicycles are environmentally friendly tools that help reduce carbon dioxide emissions.

“bicycle”应改为复数“bicycles”，因为句子泛指自行车。相应的谓语也要使用复数形式“are”。“carbon dioxide emissions”通常用复数表示碳排放。

× Additionally, bicycle are environmentally friendly tools helping reduce the carbon dioxide emission.

✓ Additionally, bicycles are environmentally friendly tools that help reduce carbon dioxide emissions.

主语“bicycles”是复数，因此谓语应使用“are”，不能使用与单数主语搭配的形式。练习时要先判断主语的单复数，再选择正确的谓语形式。