Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ви повторили запитання замість того, щоб на нього відповісти. Почніть із прямої відповіді, наприклад “Yes, I did” або “No, I didn’t”, а потім додайте 1–2 конкретні деталі: який у вас був велосипед, коли ви ним користувалися і що вам у ньому подобалося. Намагайтеся говорити не більше ніж 3–4 реченнями.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bike when I was about eight years old. I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends, especially at weekends.

제안: Відповідь починається доречно, але граматична конструкція “which can to deliver you” неправильна: після “can” потрібно використовувати інфінітив без “to” — “which can take you”. Також “the easiest type of machine” звучить неприродно в цьому контексті; краще сказати “a convenient and affordable way to get around”. Замість загальної фрази “have great time” додайте конкретні причини популярності велосипедів, наприклад низьку вартість, користь для здоров’я або зручність у заторах. Використайте зв’язку “because” або “also”, щоб логічно поєднати ідеї.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short journeys. They can help people avoid traffic, and cycling is also a good way to stay fit. Many people ride bikes in parks or use them to travel around their neighborhoods.

× Yeah, of course I think that's the easiest type of machine which can to deliver you from the point A to point B and also it's good if you want to have great time.

✓ Yeah, of course. I think that's the easiest type of machine that can deliver you from point A to point B, and it's also good if you want to have a great time.

After the modal verb can, use the base form of the verb without to. Therefore, can to deliver should be can deliver. Remember: modal verb + base verb, for example, can go, should study, and must leave.

× Yeah, of course I think that's the easiest type of machine which can to deliver you from the point A to point B and also it's good if you want to have great time.

✓ Yeah, of course. I think that's the easiest type of machine that can deliver you from point A to point B, and it's also good if you want to have a great time.

When referring to locations in a route, use point A and point B without the definite article the. The standard expression is from point A to point B, not from the point A to point B.

× Yeah, of course I think that's the easiest type of machine which can to deliver you from the point A to point B and also it's good if you want to have great time.

✓ Yeah, of course. I think that's the easiest type of machine that can deliver you from point A to point B, and it's also good if you want to have a great time.

The expression have a great time requires the indefinite article a because time is used as a singular countable noun in this expression. Say have a great time, not have great time.