Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: La risposta è corretta e diretta, ma ripete quasi esattamente le parole della domanda e non sviluppa l’idea. Aggiungi uno o due dettagli specifici, ad esempio quanto spesso usavi la bici, dove andavi o perché ti piaceva. Puoi anche usare un connettivo come “because” per rendere la risposta più naturale e completa.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a blue bike when I was about eight, and I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends. I really enjoyed it because it gave me a sense of freedom.

제안: L’idea principale è chiara, ma la risposta contiene ripetizioni e diverse esitazioni (“you know”, “in every”). La frase “a street where you can bike and meet” non è naturale né precisa: usa espressioni come “bike lanes”, “cycling paths” o “places to meet other cyclists”. Organizza la risposta con una frase principale, una ragione e un esempio concreto, evitando di ripetere “my country” e “Italy”.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in Italy, especially in smaller towns and cities. Many places have dedicated bike lanes and cycling paths, so people use bicycles both for exercise and for getting around. In some towns, cyclists also meet for group rides at the weekend.

× Well actually I think bikes are really popular in my country which is Italy you know and in every In every town there's a street where you can bike and meet

✓ Well, actually, I think bikes are really popular in my country, Italy. You know, in every town, there's a street where you can ride a bike and meet people.

The original sentence contains a repeated phrase, in every In every, and several ideas are joined together without clear punctuation or sentence boundaries. This creates a sentence-structure problem. Separate the ideas into two sentences, remove repeated words, and use commas around the nonessential place name, Italy. The phrase meet people makes the final idea complete and clear.