Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời đi thẳng vào câu hỏi và có thêm chi tiết cụ thể về người tặng, thời điểm và cảm xúc, nên nội dung khá hiệu quả. Tuy nhiên, “one of the most favorite gifts” không tự nhiên; nên dùng “one of my favorite gifts”. Ngoài ra, vì đang kể một kỷ niệm trong quá khứ, “I have ever received” có thể thay bằng “I had ever received” hoặc diễn đạt đơn giản hơn là “It was one of my favorite gifts.”

예시: Yes, I did. My grandparents bought me a bike when I was seven, and it was one of my favorite gifts. I was extremely excited because it was my first bike, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood every afternoon.

제안: Câu trả lời có ý chính phù hợp nhưng bị ngắt giữa chừng và có nhiều lỗi diễn đạt: “very pop” nên là “very popular”, “bikes along with motorbikes” cần có động từ rõ ràng, và “traffic vehicles” không tự nhiên trong ngữ cảnh này. Em nên trả lời bằng một câu chủ đề hoàn chỉnh, sau đó nêu một hoặc hai lý do cụ thể với từ nối như “because” hoặc “Moreover”. Không nên lặp lại “the reason” và cần kết thúc câu đầy đủ.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, although motorbikes are more common. Many people use them because they are affordable, easy to maintain, and convenient for traveling short distances. In addition, bicycles are becoming more popular among young people who want to exercise and reduce pollution.

× It was one of the most favorite gifts that I have ever received.

✓ It was one of my favorite gifts that I have ever received.

Favorite is generally used as an absolute adjective, so it is not normally combined with most. Use one of my favorite gifts to express that the gift was among the gifts you liked best.

× Yes, bikes along with motorbikes very pop are the most common traffic vehicles in my country the reason the reason lies in the availability and

✓ Yes, bikes, along with motorbikes, are very popular in my country. They are among the most common vehicles because they are readily available.

Pop is not the correct adjective in this context; the correct word is popular. Also, very must come before the adjective: very popular. The phrase along with motorbikes is additional information, so it should be separated with commas.

× Yes, bikes along with motorbikes very pop are the most common traffic vehicles in my country the reason the reason lies in the availability and

✓ Yes, bikes, along with motorbikes, are very popular in my country. They are among the most common vehicles because they are readily available.

The original response contains a run-on sentence, repeated words, and an unfinished ending with and. Divide the ideas into complete sentences, remove the repeated phrase the reason, and use because to introduce the reason clearly.