Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer the question directly at the beginning. Correct the grammar and word choice: say “we had a bike,” “I didn’t ride it,” “I was too young,” “bicycle,” and “I used it to commute.” Avoid repeating the same idea and use a clear contrast such as “However” or “Instead.” Also, explain specifically how you used the bicycle, rather than saying only “everyday tasks.”

예시: Yes, my family had a bicycle when I was a child, but I was too young to ride it at first. Later, I learned to ride it and used it to commute to school and run small errands. It was very useful because it was inexpensive and easy to use.

제안: Your answer is relevant and includes several reasons, but improve grammatical accuracy and sentence control. Use “most people use them,” “to commute to work,” and “go to the market.” Avoid the unclear phrase “there are the bikes” and connect the reasons more naturally with linking words such as “Moreover” and “As a result.” Add a specific example, such as heavy traffic or limited parking, to make the answer more effective.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in busy cities. Many people use them to commute to work or go to the market because they are affordable and easy to park. Moreover, they help people avoid traffic jams, which is particularly useful during rush hour.

× Not exactly we do had a bike when I was a child but I was like I don't ride that bike because I was too younger for that instead I was having a by skill.

✓ Not exactly. We did have a bike when I was a child, but I did not ride it because I was too young. Instead, I had a bicycle.

This is a run-on sentence containing several complete ideas without appropriate punctuation or connectors. Separate the ideas into shorter sentences and use but and instead to show the contrast clearly.

× Not exactly we do had a bike when I was a child but I was like I don't ride that bike because I was too younger for that instead I was having a by skill.

✓ Not exactly. We did have a bike when I was a child, but I did not ride it because I was too young. Instead, I had a bicycle.

The question asks about a past situation, so use past-tense forms. Use did have and did not ride instead of do had and do not ride. For possession in the past, had is more appropriate than was having.

× Not exactly we do had a bike when I was a child but I was like I don't ride that bike because I was too younger for that instead I was having a by skill.

✓ Not exactly. We did have a bike when I was a child, but I did not ride it because I was too young. Instead, I had a bicycle.

After too, use the base form of the adjective when expressing an excessive degree. Therefore, say too young, not too younger. Younger is a comparative form and normally requires a comparison.

× instead I was having a by skill.

✓ Instead, I had a bicycle.

The statement describes possession during childhood, so use the simple past had. The continuous form was having is not normally used for possession in this context.

× I used it to commuting to school.

✓ I used it to commute to school.

After used it to, use the base form of the verb, not the -ing form. Therefore, use to commute, not to commuting.

× Yeah, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because most of the people use it for commuting to their office and we can use it to go to market.

✓ Yeah, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because most people use them to commute to work, and we can use them to go to the market.

Bikes is plural, so it must be replaced by the plural pronoun them. Using it refers to one singular object and does not agree with bikes.

× we can use it to go to market.

✓ We can use them to go to the market.

When referring to a specific public place such as the market, use the definite article the. Also, them agrees with the plural noun bikes.

× So there are the bikes are convenient and easy to use there is no parking problem and they like bikes

✓ Bikes are convenient and easy to use, there are no parking problems, and people like them.

There are cannot be followed directly by the complete clause the bikes are convenient. Use there are with a plural noun, such as there are no parking problems, or begin the sentence directly with Bikes are convenient.

× So there are the bikes are convenient and easy to use there is no parking problem and they like bikes

✓ Bikes are convenient and easy to use, there are no parking problems, and people like them.

Several independent clauses are joined without punctuation or suitable conjunctions, creating a run-on sentence. Separate the ideas with commas and and, or use separate sentences.