Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevap anlaşılabilir olsa da zaman ve cümle yapısı hataları oldukça fazla. Geçmişten bahsettiğiniz için “have” yerine “had” ve “in seven years old” yerine “when I was seven” kullanmalısınız. “My that's bad to me” ifadesi doğal değil; burada “My dad bought it for me as a birthday surprise” denebilir. Son cümlede “I liked riding it” veya “I enjoyed riding my bike” kullanarak doğrudan bir konu cümlesi ve kısa bir açıklama oluşturun.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was seven. My dad bought it for me as a birthday surprise, so it was very special to me. I really enjoyed riding it around my neighborhood.

제안: Ana fikriniz açık, ancak cevapta gereksiz tekrarlar ve dilbilgisi hataları var. “People's not priority for bikes” yerine “drivers do not give cyclists enough priority” veya “cycling is not considered a priority” kullanmalısınız. Şimdiki genel durumdan bahsettiğiniz için “traffic was” yerine “traffic is” daha uygundur. Cevabı “Yes, bikes are quite popular, especially among...” şeklinde başlatıp, “however” ile güvenlik sorununu bağlayın ve belirli bir sonuç ekleyin.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among young people and students. However, cycling can be dangerous because drivers do not always give cyclists enough space or priority. As a result, many people prefer to use bikes only in parks or on dedicated cycle paths.

× Yes, I have a bike in seven years old.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was seven years old.

Because the question asks about your childhood, use the past tense had instead of the present tense have. The phrase in seven years old is also corrected to when I was seven years old.

× Yes, I have a bike in seven years old.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was seven years old.

Use when, not in, before an expression describing someone's age: when I was seven years old.

× My that's bad to me and it is my birthday surprise.

✓ My dad bought it for me, and it was a birthday surprise.

The original sentence does not have a clear grammatical structure. My dad is the subject, bought is the verb, and it refers to the bike. The sentence also needs a clear conjunction to connect the two ideas.

× My that's bad to me and it is my birthday surprise.

✓ My dad bought it for me, and it was a birthday surprise.

The speaker is describing a past birthday, so use the past-tense verbs bought and was instead of present-tense forms.

× I like bike ride a bike.

✓ I liked riding a bike.

After like, use a gerund when describing an activity: liked riding. The phrase bike ride a bike is not grammatically correct.

× I like bike ride a bike.

✓ I liked riding a bike.

Since the question asks about your childhood, use the past tense liked rather than the present tense like.

× Bikes are popular, but uh, traffic was, uh, traffic was dangerous for bikes because people's not priority for bikes.

✓ Bikes are popular, but traffic is dangerous for cyclists because cyclists do not have priority.

The answer describes the current situation in the country, so use the present tense is instead of the past tense was.

× Bikes are popular, but uh, traffic was, uh, traffic was dangerous for bikes because people's not priority for bikes.

✓ Bikes are popular, but traffic is dangerous for cyclists because cyclists do not have priority.

The original sentence contains repeated words and an incomplete structure. Use a clear subject and verb in the because-clause: cyclists do not have priority.

× Bikes are popular, but uh, traffic was, uh, traffic was dangerous for bikes because people's not priority for bikes.

✓ Bikes are popular, but traffic is dangerous for cyclists because cyclists are not given priority.

When the focus is on cyclists receiving or not receiving priority, use the passive structure are not given priority. This clearly shows that priority is not provided to cyclists.