Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevabınız soruya doğrudan yanıt veriyor, ancak cümle yapısı doğal değil. “I had a bike when I was a child” ifadesinden sonra satın alma bilgisini ayrı bir cümleyle vermeniz veya “a bike that my dad bought for me” şeklinde relative clause kullanmanız gerekir. Ayrıca “the bike” yerine ilk kez bahsedilen bir nesne olduğu için “a bike” kullanmalısınız. Cevabı bir neden ya da kısa bir ayrıntıyla zenginleştirerek daha etkili hâle getirebilirsiniz.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My dad bought it for me when I was about seven, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood after school.

제안: Ana fikriniz anlaşılabilir, ancak cevapta doğal olmayan ve hatalı ifadeler var. “not that much popular” yerine “not very popular”, “use their bike” yerine genel anlamda “use bikes” ve “in main roads” yerine “on main roads” kullanmalısınız. “Since” ve “so that” birlikte gereksiz; tek bir bağlaç yeterlidir. Ayrıca cümle çok uzun ve sonunda “that’s why” tamamlanmamış bir yapı oluşturuyor. Önce doğrudan görüşünüzü belirtin, ardından trafik sorununu ve insanların neden bisiklet kullanmaktan kaçındığını bir veya iki kısa cümleyle açıklayın.

예시: I don’t think bikes are very popular in Turkey. This is mainly because the roads are often crowded and there aren’t enough dedicated bike lanes, so many people feel unsafe cycling in traffic. However, cycling is becoming more common in some cities.

× Yeah, I had the bike when I was a child my dad bought for me.

✓ Yeah, I had a bike when I was a child, and my dad bought it for me.

Use a before bike because this is a singular countable noun being mentioned for the first time. The article the suggests that the listener already knows which bike you mean. Improvement suggestion: use a or an when introducing one nonspecific countable object.

× Yeah, I had the bike when I was a child my dad bought for me.

✓ Yeah, I had a bike when I was a child, and my dad bought it for me.

The original sentence incorrectly joins two independent ideas without a conjunction or suitable punctuation. Adding and creates a clear sentence structure. Improvement suggestion: connect complete clauses with conjunctions such as and, but, or because, or separate them into two sentences.

× I think bikes are not that much popular in Turkey since there is a serious traffic problem so that people are hesitating to use their bike and main roads, that's why.

✓ I do not think bikes are that popular in Turkey because there is a serious traffic problem.

Much cannot normally be used directly before the adjective popular in this structure. Use very or that before popular instead. Also, placing do not think at the beginning makes the opinion sound more natural. Improvement suggestion: use not very popular or not that popular.

× I think bikes are not that much popular in Turkey since there is a serious traffic problem so that people are hesitating to use their bike and main roads, that's why.

✓ I do not think bikes are that popular in Turkey because there is a serious traffic problem, so people hesitate to use their bikes on main roads.

The plural subject people refers to bicycles in general, so bike should be bikes when referring to the bicycles they use. Improvement suggestion: check whether a noun refers to one item or multiple items and make its form agree with the meaning.

× I think bikes are not that much popular in Turkey since there is a serious traffic problem so that people are hesitating to use their bike and main roads, that's why.

✓ I do not think bikes are that popular in Turkey because there is a serious traffic problem, so people hesitate to use their bikes on main roads.

The present simple hesitate is more suitable for a general situation or usual behavior in a country. The present continuous are hesitating suggests a temporary action happening at this moment. Improvement suggestion: use the present simple for habits, general facts, and repeated situations.

× I think bikes are not that much popular in Turkey since there is a serious traffic problem so that people are hesitating to use their bike and main roads, that's why.

✓ I do not think bikes are that popular in Turkey because there is a serious traffic problem, so people hesitate to use their bikes on main roads.

The correct preposition for using bicycles on roads is on, as in ride or use a bike on a road. The original phrase use their bike and main roads is missing the preposition and incorrectly joins the two objects. Improvement suggestion: learn common preposition patterns such as on the road, on main roads, and in traffic.

× I think bikes are not that much popular in Turkey since there is a serious traffic problem so that people are hesitating to use their bike and main roads, that's why.

✓ I do not think bikes are that popular in Turkey because there is a serious traffic problem, so people hesitate to use their bikes on main roads.

The original sentence contains several loosely connected clauses and ends with the unnecessary fragment that's why. Using because and so clearly shows the cause-and-effect relationship. Improvement suggestion: avoid combining many clauses with commas; use one clear main clause with an appropriate conjunction.