Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời có ý định nói rằng bạn từng có xe đạp và thường đạp xe đến trường, nhưng diễn đạt còn rất khó hiểu do phát âm và dùng từ sai như “we will try”, “bites” và “go to buy”. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề, sau đó thêm lý do hoặc ví dụ cụ thể. Không cần dùng “Therefore” nếu ý sau không tạo ra quan hệ nguyên nhân–kết quả rõ ràng. Hãy dùng cấu trúc quá khứ phù hợp như “I had a bike” và “I rode it to school”.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it to school because my house was quite far away. It was a simple bike, but it was very useful for getting around.

제안: Bạn đã trả lời đúng hướng khi cho rằng xe đạp phổ biến, nhưng câu trả lời còn nhiều lỗi khiến người nghe khó hiểu, chẳng hạn “this by a popular”, “Vietnamese is very live” và “go to buy a school”. Hãy dùng câu chủ đề rõ ràng: “Yes, bikes are quite popular in Vietnam.” Sau đó giải thích bằng hai ý cụ thể, chẳng hạn học sinh thường đạp xe đến trường và xe đạp phù hợp với những quãng đường ngắn. Nên thay các từ đệm như “uh” bằng linking words đơn giản như “because” và “especially”.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in Vietnam, especially among schoolchildren. Many students ride them to school because bikes are affordable and convenient for short distances. They are also a practical way to avoid traffic in crowded areas.

× Yes, we will try.

✓ Yes, I did.

The question asks about a past experience in childhood, so the answer should use the past-tense auxiliary did, not the future form will. Use Yes, I did to answer a question beginning with Did you...?.

× I usually uh, uh, have a bites

✓ I usually had a bike

Bike is a singular countable noun, so it should not be used with the plural form bites. The correct noun is bike. Also, because the question refers to childhood, had is more appropriate than have.

× I usually uh, uh, have a bites because, uh at home so far uh, go to school. Therefore I usually go to buy.

✓ I usually had a bike because I used it to go to school. Therefore, I usually went to school by bike.

The answer describes a past habit, so the main verbs should be in the past tense: had, used, and went. The expression go to buy is incorrect for transportation. Use go to school by bike or ride a bike to school.

× Therefore I usually go to buy.

✓ Therefore, I usually went to school by bike.

The preposition and transportation expression are incorrect. We say go to school by bike or ride a bike to school, not go to buy. Because the response describes childhood, went should be used.

× Yes, uh, I think this by a popular in my country

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

The subject should be the plural noun bikes because the statement refers to bikes in general. The singular form this cannot refer to bikes in general, and popular does not take the article a.

× Yes, uh, I think this by a popular in my country

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

The plural subject bikes must be followed by the plural verb are. The form by is not the correct form of the verb be in this sentence.

× many student, uh, usually go to buy a school

✓ Many students usually go to school by bike.

The plural quantifier many must be followed by a plural countable noun, so student should be students. The correct expression is go to school, not go to buy a school. To describe transportation, add by bike.

× many student, uh, usually go to buy a school

✓ Many students usually go to school by bike.

The correct preposition is to in go to school. When describing the method of transportation, use by before bike: go to school by bike.