Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly in the past tense because the question asks about your childhood. Correct errors such as “Yes, I do” to “Yes, I did,” “my parent” to “my parents,” and “when I was children” to “when I was a child.” Avoid repeating “bike” too often, and use more natural expressions such as “when I was young” instead of “in my juvenile life.” Organize the answer with a clear answer, followed by one or two specific details about using the bike and what happened to it.

예시: Yes, I did. My parents gave me a bike when I was a child, and I rode it almost every day. Unfortunately, I had an accident a few years later, and the bike was badly damaged. I really enjoyed cycling, so it was an important part of my childhood.

제안: Respond to the specific question about the popularity of bikes in your country rather than repeating your personal childhood story. Begin with a clear opinion, then support it with reasons, examples, or a comparison. Use the present tense for current popularity and linking words such as “because,” “also,” and “however.” Use natural plural forms, including “bikes” and “people,” and avoid unnecessary repetition.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and people who live in crowded cities. Many people use them because they are affordable, convenient, and environmentally friendly. However, cycling is less common in areas with heavy traffic because some roads do not have safe bike lanes.

× Yes I do

✓ Yes, I did.

The question uses the past tense, Did you have a bike?, so the short answer should also use the past tense: Yes, I did. Use did rather than do when answering a past-tense question.

× when I was children

✓ when I was a child

The subject I refers to one person, so the singular noun child is required. The correct expression is I was a child, not I was children.

× I love the bike so much so I ride it almost every day

✓ I loved the bike so much that I rode it almost every day

The speaker is describing a past childhood experience, so the verbs should be in the past tense: loved and rode. The conjunction that is also needed after so much to connect the result clause correctly.

× I love the bike so much so I ride it almost every day

✓ I loved the bike so much that I rode it almost every day

The correct result structure is so + adjective or adverb + that + clause. Therefore, use so much that I rode rather than so much so I ride.

× until it's finally broken in an accident and the bike is destroyed

✓ until it was finally broken in an accident and the bike was destroyed

This event happened in the past, so the present forms it is and is destroyed must be changed to the past forms it was and was destroyed.

× Yes I do, my parent gave me a bike when I was children and I love the bike so much so I ride it almost every day and until it's finally broken in an accident and the bike is destroyed.

✓ Yes, I did. My parent gave me a bike when I was a child, and I loved the bike so much that I rode it almost every day until it was finally broken in an accident and the bike was destroyed.

The original contains several independent clauses joined by commas and repeated conjunctions, which makes the sentence difficult to follow. Separate the short answer into its own sentence and connect the remaining clauses with appropriate conjunctions and punctuation.

× I enjoy riding a bike in my juvenile life

✓ I enjoyed riding a bike in my childhood

Because the response describes a past period, enjoy should be changed to enjoyed. Childhood is the usual noun for the period when someone was a child.

× I think bike became my lifestyle

✓ I think the bike became my lifestyle

A singular countable noun such as bike normally needs a determiner. Since the speaker has already mentioned a specific bike, use the definite article the: the bike.

× I think bike became my lifestyle

✓ I think the bike became my lifestyle

Became is already in the past tense, which is appropriate because the change happened in the past. The necessary correction in this sentence is the article before bike.