Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: You repeated the examiner's question instead of answering it. Respond directly with a clear yes-or-no answer, then add one or two specific details, such as when you used the bike, where you rode it, or how you felt about it. Use linking words such as “because” or “so” to connect your ideas.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I usually rode it around my neighborhood after school because it was a fun way to spend time outdoors. I also used it to visit my friends on weekends.

제안: You repeated the examiner's question rather than giving an answer. State your opinion directly and support it with specific reasons or examples, such as commuting, exercise, environmental benefits, or differences between cities and rural areas. Keep your response to two or three well-connected sentences.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and people who want to exercise. They are affordable and convenient for short journeys, and many people also choose them because they are environmentally friendly. However, cycling is less common in crowded cities because of heavy traffic.