Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer the question directly and pay attention to the tense and meaning. The examiner is asking whether you owned a bicycle during your childhood, not whether you have a child. Begin with a clear yes/no statement and add one specific detail, such as how often you used the bike or where you rode it.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it around my neighborhood after school, and I really enjoyed exploring the area with my friends.

제안: Give a direct answer and use natural expressions such as “bikes are popular” and “riding a bike is fun.” Avoid repeating the word “bike,” and replace the inappropriate phrase “in the hallway” with a suitable location, such as “in parks” or “on bike paths.” Support your opinion with a specific reason, such as convenience, affordability, or environmental benefits.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient. Many people ride them to work or school, while others use them for exercise in parks and on bike paths.

× I'm sorry, I don't have a child.

✓ I'm sorry, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about a past experience, so the answer should use the simple past tense: 'didn't have,' not the present tense 'don't have.' The answer should also refer to having a bike, because that is what the examiner asked about.

× I think the bikes are popular in my country because bikes are very fun to bike in the hallway.

✓ I think bikes are popular in my country because they are very fun to ride.

When speaking about bikes in general, do not use the definite article 'the' before the plural noun 'bikes.' The phrase 'the bikes' usually refers to specific bikes. Use 'bikes' for a general statement. Also, 'they are fun to ride' is a more natural expression than 'bikes are fun to bike.'