Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer the question directly using a complete sentence and avoid repetition. The phrase “I used to have” needs an object, such as “a bike,” and “but now not” is unnatural. You could add one specific detail about how often you rode it or what you used it for.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it around my neighborhood after school, especially at the weekends.

제안: State your opinion clearly and use natural expressions such as “Bicycles are quite popular in Nepal.” Improve the grammar by saying “on the roads” instead of “in the road,” and explain why they are popular with a specific supporting detail. Use a linking word such as “because” to connect your reason.

예시: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in Nepal, especially in smaller towns and villages. They are an affordable and convenient way to travel because people can use them on narrow roads and avoid traffic.

× I used to have but now not. I have not.

✓ I used to have one, but I do not have one now.

The phrases but now not and I have not are incomplete in this context. They do not clearly express the present situation. Use a complete clause with a subject and a verb: I do not have one now.

× I used to have but now not. I have not.

✓ I used to have one, but I do not have one now.

Used to have correctly describes a past habit or situation. For the present situation, use the present simple form do not have, not the incomplete form have not.

× Yeah, basically in Nepal bikes are the common vehicles in the road and better way.

✓ Yes, basically, bikes are common vehicles on the road in Nepal and are a better way to travel.

Use the preposition on with road when referring to vehicles traveling on its surface. In the road is not the natural prepositional phrase in this context.

× Yeah, basically in Nepal bikes are the common vehicles in the road and better way.

✓ Yes, basically, bikes are common vehicles on the road in Nepal and are a better way to travel.

The definite article the is unnecessary before common vehicles because the sentence refers to bikes as a general category, not to one specific group of vehicles.

× Yeah, basically in Nepal bikes are the common vehicles in the road and better way.

✓ Yes, basically, bikes are common vehicles on the road in Nepal and are a better way to travel.

Way is a singular countable noun, so it needs an article. Use a better way, not better way. The phrase a better way to travel is complete and natural.

× Yeah, basically in Nepal bikes are the common vehicles in the road and better way.

✓ Yes, basically, bikes are common vehicles on the road in Nepal and are a better way to travel.

The original sentence combines the ideas without a complete parallel structure. After bikes are common vehicles, use are again before a better way to travel. This makes both descriptions grammatically complete.