Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
수험생
Yeah, I had a bike when I was a child
시험관
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
수험생
Cycling is not a common transportation mode in my country due to its weather situation. However, people tend to use public transportation or private vehicles like cars or motorcycles.
평가
총점
Part 1
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
점수: 65.0제안: Answer directly, but add one or two specific details to develop your response. For example, mention when you used the bike, where you rode it, or how you felt about it. Avoid repeating the wording of the question; use a more natural phrase such as “when I was younger.”
예시: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about seven, and I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends. I really enjoyed it because it gave me a sense of freedom.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
점수: 78.0제안: Your answer is clear and well organized, and “however” effectively introduces a contrast. To sound more natural, replace “weather situation” with “weather conditions” and “transportation mode” with “means of transportation.” Add a specific example of the weather or explain why some people still cycle.
예시: No, I wouldn’t say they are very popular as a means of transportation. The weather is often extremely hot and humid, so most people prefer using public transportation or private vehicles such as cars and motorcycles. However, cycling is becoming more popular for exercise, especially in parks and on dedicated bike paths.
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