Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly and use a clear two- or three-sentence structure. Correct “vibe” to “bike,” avoid unnecessary fillers such as “by the way” and “umm,” and say “ride my bike on the road” rather than “riding with my bike in roads.” Add one specific detail, such as who you rode with or how you felt, and avoid restarting or leaving the sentence unfinished.

예시: Yes, I had a pink bike when I was a child. I often rode it on the quiet roads near my home, usually with my friends. I really enjoyed it because it made me feel independent.

제안: Begin with a clear topic sentence, then explain why bikes are popular using accurate grammar and specific details. Use “bikes are very popular” instead of “it’s very popular,” and replace the unclear phrase “everyone there are like tours” with “many people take part in cycling events.” Avoid repetition such as “many, many” and “rewards, awards,” and use linking words such as “for example” or “because.”

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among young people and fitness enthusiasts. For example, many people take part in organized cycling events, where they ride long distances and compete for prizes. Cycling is popular because it is both healthy and environmentally friendly.

× I remember the the color of my bike.

✓ I remember the color of my bike.

The definite article the is repeated. Use it only once before color.

× I remember the color of my bike it was pink and I remember that I was riding with my bike in roads long roads.

✓ I remember the color of my bike. It was pink, and I remember riding it on long roads.

The original sentence joins several independent ideas without proper punctuation or structure. Divide the ideas into two sentences and use a conjunction to connect the related information.

× I was riding with my bike in roads.

✓ I was riding my bike on roads.

Use ride my bike rather than ride with my bike. Use the preposition on with roads when describing the surface where an activity takes place.

× It's very popular in my country.

✓ Bikes are very popular in my country.

The question refers to bikes, which is plural. The pronoun it is singular, so it does not agree with the subject. Use the plural noun bikes and the plural verb are.

× Everyone there are like tours.

✓ There are many bike tours in my country.

The there is or there are construction must begin with there, followed by the correct form of be and a noun. Use there are because tours is plural.

× Everyone there are like tours.

✓ Everyone there likes bike tours.

Everyone is grammatically singular, so it must be followed by the singular verb likes, not are or like.

× When many, many people go to participate, biking their bikes through long roads per one hour, they compete and they gain rewards, awards.

✓ Many people participate by biking along long roads for one hour. They compete and win awards.

The original sentence contains an incomplete when-clause and an awkward participle phrase. Use a complete subject and verb in the first sentence, then use a separate sentence for the competition result.

× Biking their bikes through long roads per one hour.

✓ Biking along long roads for one hour.

Use along to describe movement beside or on the length of a road. Use for to describe a duration of time; per is not natural in this context.