Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ответ в целом понятен, но есть существенные ошибки в грамматике и выборе слова. Используйте прошедшее время: “I didn’t have”, а “back” нужно заменить на “bike”. Начните с прямого ответа и добавьте краткую причину или деталь, например, объясните, почему у вас не было велосипеда. Это сделает ответ более естественным и содержательным.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My parents thought it was too dangerous for me to ride one. Instead, I usually played football with my friends.

제안: Ответ соответствует вопросу и содержит попытку привести пример, но есть ошибки в грамматике, артиклях и устойчивых выражениях. Используйте “bikes are popular”, а не “bikes are popularity”; правильно говорить “ride a bike”, а не “drive in a bike”. Замените повтор “bike” более естественными вариантами, например “cycling” или “this form of transport”. Свяжите идеи с помощью “because”, “especially” или “for example” и добавьте конкретную причину популярности велосипедов.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among young people. Many people ride them because they are affordable and environmentally friendly. For example, my friends often cycle to school or work instead of taking public transport.

× When I was a child, I don't have a back.

✓ When I was a child, I didn't have a bike.

The question asks about a past situation, so the past tense is required. Use did not or didn't + the base form of the verb: didn't have. Also, bike is the appropriate word in this context.

× Yes, I think the bikes are popularity in my country.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

Popular is an adjective used after the linking verb are to describe bikes. Popularity is a noun and cannot be used in this position. When talking about bikes in general, use the plural noun bikes without the definite article the.

× All my friends have a bike and uh, everyone to drive in a bike.

✓ All my friends have a bike, and everyone rides a bike.

Everyone to drive is not a complete finite verb phrase. After the subject everyone, use a conjugated verb. Because everyone is grammatically singular, the verb should be rides. A useful structure is everyone + verb in the third-person singular form.

× All my friends have a bike and uh, everyone to drive in a bike.

✓ All my friends have a bike, and everyone rides on a bike.

The preposition in is not used with a bicycle in this meaning. Use on when describing a person's position on a bicycle. In everyday English, ride a bike is also very natural and does not require a preposition.