Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevabınız soruyla ilgili değil; “Asian” bir milletten/etnik kökenden bahseder ve bisiklet sorusuna yanıt vermez. Önce doğrudan “Yes” veya “No” diyerek cevap verin, ardından geçmişte bisikletiniz olup olmadığını ve mümkünse nerede ya da ne sıklıkla kullandığınızı belirtin. Cevabınızı 2–3 doğal cümleyle tamamlayarak temel yapıyı ve ilgili kelimeleri kullanın.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I usually rode it around my neighborhood after school, especially at weekends.

제안: Cevabınız soruyla bağlantılı değil; “Samsung” bir marka adıdır. Soruyu doğrudan yanıtlamak için “Yes, I do” veya “No, I don’t” kullanın ve bisikletlerin ülkenizde neden popüler ya da popüler olmadığını açıklayın. “Because”, “especially” veya “for example” gibi bağlayıcılarla belirli bir neden ya da örnek ekleyin.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among young people. Many people ride them for exercise, and some use them to avoid traffic in crowded cities.

× Asian.

✓ Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child.

The original answer is a sentence fragment without a verb and does not answer the question. Use the auxiliary verb did to answer a past-tense yes/no question, and use had to give the complete answer. Improvement suggestion: For questions beginning with Did you..., start with Yes, I did or No, I did not, followed by a complete sentence.

× Samsung.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country.

The original answer is a sentence fragment without a verb and does not express whether bikes are popular. The correction contains the subject bikes and the verb are, which are necessary for a complete sentence. Improvement suggestion: For questions beginning with Do you think..., begin with Yes, I think or No, I do not think, and then give a complete present-tense sentence.