Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly with “Yes, I did,” not “Yes, I had.” Use “ride a bike” rather than “drive a bike,” and use the past simple consistently. The phrase “All my life I had three bikes” is unnatural; say “I had three bikes at different stages of my childhood.” Also, use parallel structures such as “one for children, one for teenagers, and one for adults.”

예시: Yes, I did. I learned to ride a bike when I was nine years old. I had three bikes at different stages of my childhood: one for children, one for teenagers, and one for adults. I especially enjoyed riding it around my neighborhood with my friends.

제안: Begin with a clear topic sentence: “Yes, I think bikes are quite popular.” Then explain that they are especially common among children and teenagers in rural areas. Improve the grammar by using “a good way to spend free time” and “a convenient means of transport.” Avoid unnatural phrases such as “it best thinks” and “other ones,” and connect your ideas with “also” or “because.”

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular, especially among children and teenagers in rural areas. They are a fun and inexpensive way to spend free time with friends. Also, bikes are a convenient means of transport for short journeys, so people can use them to visit nearby places.

× Yes, I had.

✓ Yes, I did.

The question uses the past-tense auxiliary did, so the short answer should also use did. Had is the main verb in the question, but it is not normally repeated in a short answer to a did-question.

× All my life I had three bikes, one for kids, other one for adults, and third one is for teenagers.

✓ I have had three bikes in my life: one for kids, another one for adults, and a third one for teenagers.

The phrase all my life refers to a period continuing up to the present, so the present perfect have had is more appropriate than the simple past had. Use the present perfect for experiences or situations that began in the past and remain relevant now.

× All my life I had three bikes, one for kids, other one for adults, and third one is for teenagers.

✓ I have had three bikes in my life: one for kids, another one for adults, and a third one for teenagers.

The nouns other one and third one need appropriate determiners. Use another one when introducing an additional item and a third one when introducing the third item in a series. Articles and determiners help clarify whether a noun is being introduced or has already been mentioned.

× I think yes because for teenagers or kids in villages it best thinks for spend free time with friends or with other ones.

✓ I think so because, for teenagers or kids in villages, it is a good way of spending free time with friends or other people.

I think so is the natural structure for agreeing with or confirming an idea. The original clause it best thinks is not grammatically structured: it needs a subject, a linking verb, and a suitable noun phrase. A useful pattern is it is a good way of + verb-ing.

× It best thinks for spend free time with friends or with other ones.

✓ It is a good way of spending free time with friends or other people.

After the preposition of, the verb should be in the -ing form: spending, not spend. Remember that prepositions such as of, for, and about are normally followed by a noun or a gerund ending in -ing.

× With friends or with other ones.

✓ With friends or other people.

The pronoun ones generally replaces previously mentioned things, not people. When referring to additional people, use other people or other friends instead.