Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly with the natural phrase “Yes, I did,” because the question uses the auxiliary verb “did.” To make the answer more effective, add one specific detail, such as when you used the bike, where you rode it, or who taught you. Avoid stopping after a very short answer when a brief explanation would make your response more developed.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was about seven, and I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.

제안: State your opinion clearly and use accurate plural forms: “most people prefer cars or buses.” Avoid fillers such as “umm,” the unclear phrase “or something,” and the contradictory ending “then bikes and yes.” Organize your answer with a clear reason and a specific example or comparison, such as traffic, public transport, weather, or cycling facilities. Use linking words like “because,” “although,” or “for example” to make your ideas more coherent.

예시: No, I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country. Most people prefer to travel by car or public transport because these options are more convenient for long distances. Although some people cycle for exercise, bicycles are not the main form of transportation.

× Yes, I had.

✓ Yes, I did.

The question uses the auxiliary verb did: Did you have a bike...? A short answer should repeat this auxiliary verb, so the correct response is Yes, I did. Alternatively, you can give a complete answer: Yes, I had a bike.

× in my country most of the people prefer to use car or bus or something

✓ In my country, most people prefer to use a car or a bus or something similar.

When talking about people in general, use most people, not most of the people. Most of the people refers to a specific group of people already identified.

× car or bus

✓ a car or a bus

Car and bus are singular countable nouns, so each needs a determiner. Use a before each noun when referring to one example of each type of vehicle.

× Umm like public transportation? Umm then bikes and yes.

✓ I mean, they prefer public transportation to bikes.

The original expression is fragmented and does not form a complete grammatical sentence. A complete sentence needs a subject and a verb. Here, they is the subject, prefer is the verb, and public transportation to bikes clearly expresses the intended comparison.