Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 「Yes, I have」は過去の質問に対して不自然なので、「Yes, I did.」を使いましょう。また、「I had」「I sold」の重複を避け、最初に直接答えた後、理由や現在の状況を1〜2文で説明すると自然です。「use bicycle」は「use a bicycle」または「ride a bicycle」とし、過去の習慣には「used to」を使うとよいでしょう。

예시: Yes, I did. I had a bicycle when I was a child and used to ride it to school and around my neighborhood. However, I stopped using it recently, so I sold it.

제안: 「Absolutely.」の後に「Yes, I do.」を加えると、質問への答えがより明確になります。「work place」はこの文脈では「work」または「their workplaces」が自然です。「because」の重複をなくし、最後の「bass」はおそらく「bus」の誤りなので、意味を確認して文を完成させましょう。具体例を最後まで述べ、接続語として「For example」や「Also」を適切に使うと、よりまとまりのある回答になります。

예시: Yes, I do. Bikes are very popular in Japan because they are convenient and inexpensive. Many people ride them to school, work, or the nearest train station. For example, I used to ride a bicycle to the station before taking the train.

× Yes, I have.

✓ Yes, I did.

The question uses the past tense, 'Did you have...?', so the short answer should use the past-tense auxiliary 'did,' not the present-tense auxiliary 'have.'

× I had.

✓ I had one.

The verb 'have' usually needs an object when it means possession. Adding 'one' makes it clear that 'one' refers to a bicycle and completes the sentence naturally.

× I haven't used bicycle to go somewhere.

✓ I haven't used a bicycle to go somewhere.

A singular countable noun such as 'bicycle' needs an article when it is mentioned in a general, non-specific way. Use 'a bicycle' here.

× So I sold.

✓ So I sold it.

The verb 'sell' needs a direct object in this sentence. Use 'it' to refer to the bicycle.

× Most Japanese people use them to go to school or to go to work place because because it's very convenient.

✓ Most Japanese people use them to go to school or to work because it's very convenient.

The conjunction 'because' is repeated accidentally. Use it only once to introduce the reason.