Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is grammatically correct and directly answers the question, but it is too short to demonstrate your speaking ability. Add one or two specific details, such as when you got the bike, how often you used it, or what you used it for. Use a linking word such as “because” or “so” to connect your ideas naturally.

예시: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about seven, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood after school. It was a small blue bike, and I really enjoyed riding it with my friends.

제안: You give a clear opinion and support it with relevant examples. However, avoid the unnecessary comma after “students,” and reduce repetition by using more varied expressions instead of repeating “by bike.” You could also make the answer more specific by mentioning reasons such as convenience, exercise, or environmental benefits. A clearer structure with “for example” would make the response more natural and effective.

예시: Yes, they are quite popular in my country because many people cycle to work, especially in cities with heavy traffic. For example, a lot of students ride to school because it is convenient and inexpensive. Cycling is also becoming more common because people want to stay healthy and reduce pollution.