Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答基本直接，但将“bike”误说成了“bag”，影响了关键信息的准确性；“when I was child”应改为“when I was a child”。“brought it to Camille to my school”表达不清，应该说“rode it to school”；“working”应为“walking”。此外，“it was”重复了一次。建议先明确回答是否有自行车，再说明颜色、购买者和使用原因，并使用“because”连接细节。

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was red, and my parents bought it for me. I often rode it to school because it was faster than walking and gave me more freedom.

제안: 回答观点明确，也提到了共享单车这一具体例子，但语法和搭配需要改进。“the bike”应改为“bikes”，“in my country China”应改为“in China”，“in streets”应改为“on the streets”，“in everywhere”应改为“everywhere”，“my countries”应改为“my country”。建议补充共享单车受欢迎的原因，例如方便、便宜和适合短途出行，并用“especially”或“because”使内容更连贯。

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in China. You can see them everywhere, especially shared bikes on city streets. They are convenient and inexpensive, so many people use them for short journeys or to get to the subway.

× Yes I had a bag when I was child.

✓ Yes, I had a bag when I was a child.

“child”是可数名词单数，前面需要使用不定冠词“a”。表示“当我还是一个孩子时”应说“when I was a child”。

× I think the bike in my country China is very popular.

✓ I think bikes in my country, China, are very popular.

这里是在泛指中国的自行车，而不是某一辆特定的自行车，所以应使用复数“bikes”。主语变成复数后，系动词也要使用“are”。

× In streets you can see bikes in everywhere

✓ On the streets, you can see bikes everywhere.

表示“在街道上”通常使用介词“on”，所以应说“on the streets”。“everywhere”本身已经表示“到处”，前面不需要再加介词“in”。

× and in my countries we have the shared bike

✓ And in my country, we have shared bikes.

“China”是一个国家，因此应使用单数“country”，而不是“countries”。“shared bikes”表示共享单车这一类事物，通常使用复数形式；同时，泛指时不需要使用定冠词“the”。