Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly using the past tense: “No, I didn’t have a bike.” Use “when I was a child,” not “when I was children.” You could add a brief reason or alternative activity to make the answer more developed. Avoid switching from the past tense (“didn’t have”) to the present tense (“don’t have”).

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My parents thought it was unsafe to ride in the busy streets near our home, so I usually played football with my friends instead.

제안: Give a clear opinion first, then support it with one or two specific reasons. Avoid repetition such as “prefer to prefer,” fillers such as “uh” and “umm,” and incorrect phrases such as “most of my people,” “adulthood,” and “they know about my.” Use “most people in my country,” “adults,” and explain what adults know or why they ride more. Use linking words such as “because” and “however” to make the answer coherent.

예시: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country. Most people prefer using cars or public transport because the roads are often crowded and there are few dedicated bike lanes. However, cycling is becoming more common among adults who want to exercise and avoid traffic.

× No, I don't have a bike when I was children.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about the student's childhood, so the answer should use the past tense. Change don't have to didn't have. Also, child should be singular because the sentence refers to one person: I.

× No, I don't have a bike when I was children.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

Children is the plural form of child, but the subject I refers to one person. Use the singular noun child after was: when I was a child.

× I don't think so because most of my people in my country, uh, prefer to prefer using phone rather than uh, use bicycle.

✓ I don't think so because most people in my country prefer using a phone rather than using a bicycle.

Singular countable nouns such as phone and bicycle need an article when used in this general way. Use a phone and a bicycle. The repeated phrase prefer to prefer has also been reduced to the natural form prefer using.

× I don't think so because most of my people in my country, uh, prefer to prefer using phone rather than uh, use bicycle.

✓ I don't think so because most people in my country prefer using a phone rather than using a bicycle.

After prefer, use a consistent verb pattern. Prefer using ... rather than using ... is natural and parallel. Avoid repeating prefer to prefer.

× And I think umm, adulthood use bicycle more than children because they know about my.

✓ And I think adults use bicycles more than children because they know more about them.

The intended subject is adults, which is plural, so use use rather than uses. If adulthood were the subject, the verb would need to be uses, but adulthood is not the natural word for people in this comparison.

× And I think umm, adulthood use bicycle more than children because they know about my.

✓ And I think adults use bicycles more than children because they know more about them.

Use the plural noun adults to refer to adult people. Also, bicycles is plural because the sentence discusses bicycles in general. Use plural nouns when making a general comparison between groups.

× And I think umm, adulthood use bicycle more than children because they know about my.

✓ And I think adults use bicycles more than children because they know more about them.

Bicycle is a singular countable noun and normally needs an article, as in a bicycle. In this general statement, the plural form bicycles is more natural and does not need an article.

× And I think umm, adulthood use bicycle more than children because they know about my.

✓ And I think adults use bicycles more than children because they know more about them.

My is a possessive determiner and must be followed by a noun, such as my bicycle. It cannot stand alone here. Them correctly refers to bicycles. Use a pronoun that matches the noun it replaces.