Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer the question directly and use the correct noun “bike,” not “bug.” Avoid sentence fragments and unnecessary repetition. Organize your response with a clear topic sentence followed by specific details, such as the bike’s size, colors, or how often you used it. For example, say “I had a bike” rather than “I had the bike,” because you are mentioning it for the first time.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was quite small and had green and black parts. I often rode it around my neighborhood after school.

제안: Give a complete and grammatically accurate explanation. Use “people,” not “the people,” and say “ride bikes to work or school and in their free time.” Avoid repeating “it’s” and use the correct plural noun phrase “a popular activity” or “popular activities.” Add a specific reason or example and connect your ideas with linking words such as “because” or “also.”

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and office workers. Many people ride them to school or work because they are affordable and environmentally friendly. Cycling is also a popular activity in people’s free time.

× Yeah, I had the bug when I was a child and it was. Big and it's also green and black, yes.

✓ Yeah, I had a bike when I was a child. It was big, and it was also green and black.

Use a before bike because this is the first time the bike is mentioned. The article the is used for something specific or already known. The word bug also appears to be a spelling or word-choice error; bike is the intended word here.

× Big

✓ It was big.

Big is an adjective without a subject or a verb, so it is a sentence fragment. Use the subject it and the past-tense verb was to form a complete sentence.

× Yeah, I had the bug when I was a child and it was. Big and it's also green and black, yes.

✓ Yeah, I had a bike when I was a child. It was big, and it was also green and black.

The answer describes a bike in the past, so use the past-tense form was instead of the present-tense form is in it's. Keep the verb tense consistent throughout the description.

× Especially the people ride the bike while they're going to work or school and free time.

✓ Especially, people ride bikes when they go to work or school and in their free time.

The original sentence has an unnatural structure and does not connect the activities clearly. Use people as the subject, when they go to introduce the usual situation, and in their free time to show the correct relationship between the activity and free time.

× Especially the people ride the bike while they're going to work or school and free time.

✓ Especially, people ride bikes when they go to work or school and in their free time.

Use the preposition in before their free time. The phrase in their free time means during the time when they are not working or studying.

× It's also it's so popular activities

✓ It is also a very popular activity.

Activity must be singular because it refers to biking as one type of activity. Use the singular noun activity with the singular article a.

× It's also it's so popular activities

✓ It is also a very popular activity.

The original sentence repeats the subject and verb in it's also it's and does not form a clear grammatical structure. Use one subject and one verb: It is also a very popular activity.