Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答没有直接回答考官关于“自行车”的问题，而是重复并改成了一个关于“书包”的问题，因此内容相关性和沟通效果很弱。回答时应先明确说明自己小时候是否有自行车，然后补充一个具体细节，例如是谁买的、什么时候骑以及在哪里骑。不要用反问句代替回答。

예시: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a small blue bike when I was about seven. I often rode it around our neighborhood with my friends after school.

제안: 你的回答没有回应考官关于“自行车是否受欢迎”的问题，而是把主题改成了“书包”，所以缺少相关内容和个人观点。你应该先直接回答“是”或“不是”，再用原因和具体例子进行说明，并使用“because”或“for example”等连接词。

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and young adults. They are convenient and inexpensive, and many people use them to commute or exercise. For example, bike-sharing services are common in large cities.